I liked the idea that the Ducks went to Disney World in Florida. Great job!

I loved the snakes on a plane and newsies references! And the part where Charlie met Mickey Mouse!

LMFAO I totally gawt the Newsies refrence because King of New York was always my fav song in that movie :) ahh Portman sure has grown since then.

Aww...nice and sweet :)

snakes on a plane - I really didn't see how the start with the motorbike rider linked to the end with the snakes. Then again, I was only half awake.

aw thats so cute!... I don't blame Julie either! sudden darkness sucks!

Is it sad that im uber happy that Portman picked up on the whole Virgin Records name thing. I like this Portman. Hell, I think i've liked all your Portmans. lol.

I love this story. It was really cool that you used the king of new york.(I love Newsies!)

Great story. I loved it.

Just wanted to say I loved your references, especially the King of New York one.

Great story! Cant wait to keep reading!

Aw! how adorable!

I can't believe it's over. Adam was the only one who didn't achieve his goal. Oh well, I didn't think everyone would. I like that Julie finally got her prince. And that Aimee and Luis got a chance to talk. Great job.

Aww, it's a shame it's over, but that was the perfect ending - I love Julie and Portman together! Good job! :)

“Do you want to have sex with me?” She finally just spit it out. He looked at her dumbfounded.

“Like, right now?”

Mwah-ha-ha - love it! A totally Portman answer which ended up being very sweet!

lol charlie reminded me of pacey in the beginning of the chapter when he signed it for aimee. it's so sad that nobody came except for a few of the pretty boys.

“Is that what we look like?” Connie said making a face at them.

“No,” Charlie said shaking his head, “you’re way worse.”

haha. luis and aimee are cute ones. i hope things work out for them. this was very entertaining to read, it was great.