Great story. Minor spelling errors but not bad. You are a great story teller snd I can not wait for more

This was amazing. I didn't want to stop reading. I loved the characters & how they grew & Sarah & Jareth's relationship was also done well. Robin was a great villain. The Magi was a surprising addition. Overall really splendid.

It's "thou" in the nominative, not "thee." So: "Thou knowest", "Thou dost", "Thou shalt not." And "thee" is the objective: "I shall give thee a crystal orb", "We wish thee a good Samhain", etc. Just FYI. (Or "FTI": For thine information"...)

Well, despite your appalling grammar, spelling, punctuation, syntax and ignorant misuse of words, I LOVED this story. You may lack literary smoothness, but you're a damn fine storyteller, and I will be reading as much of your work as I can.

Dear God, why am I still even reading? "At the reins", not "at the reigns." And it's Open Sesame, not Open oh says oh me. Unbelievable. Did you not have anyone look at this for you?

Unknown variable. And for gods' sake, it's "taut", not "taunt"!

Loved loved loved this! Labyrinth is such a great background story for a quest and you wrote this very well. Thankyou!

A Quiet Man quote! I love this story even more now if that's possible. :)

I INSIST THAT U WRITE A SEQUEL!

That was lovely. I thoroughly enjoyed every word.

Haha I LOVED this chapter. So far it's my favorite. Especially the last parts.

I liked Meep. I really do. He's adorable and he just bout steals the whole show This is a good one. (but then again I'm biased, cause I like all of your stories) I wonder how Sarah ahem Sareth will make out with the extraordinary tourney? Dun dun dun... (I guess I'll just have to read on, won't I?)

Woah. I've loved all of your stuff so far, but it sure is a nice change to see Jareth being nice to Sarah! And I have to say, I love that you haven't aged her in this one. This might actually the the first labyrinth long adventure tale that I've read which doesn't have Sarah being several years older! The only complaints I have are that it probably shouldn't be rated M, it seems like a T, to be honest, also, rather than angst, the second category of Adventure would be much more fitting. Other than that, I just adore it! You've written muchote than anyone I've seen on here, for quality, and the sheer amount of chapters, and huge content in all of your stories! There are a lot, but they're all long, not just one-shots, like most who have a large amount. As well as that, when I look at the publish/update dates on your stories, I see that you must have been updating them more than once a day, which is fantastic! And even more admirable to see that you still managed to get so many reviews!

Ohhhh you were right! I DID love this one! Fantastic read!

Now... on to part II...

Ravenna

One of the more original Labyrinth fics I've read. But it just begs for a sequel. Thanks for the story. :)