I really love this fic. :)

Faved. :D

Ok, officially, If you owned the movie, it would have made a really good ending. I cried when Grey died.

Good job,

Reeserella

This would have made a dreat alternate ending! Glad that you posted it, it's a unique take on what could have happened. Great job!

Thank you! Much better ending! I hated it that Gray had to die...made me sniffle.

friggin' sweet. I loved both endings

Loved the ending! Awesome storyline too! One of my favorite movies deserves to be as good as this .

I still love it

I wish that this could have been the ending. It's much better since Gray came back. Good job_

aw now this is a much happier ending to it. not that I didn't like the movie ending. this is just sweeter

Thank you for writing this ending. This is how it should have ended with something positive.

i think i like this ending better lol

You see that's how it should of happened! i got very depressed watching the movie last night. But this story has made me feel a little better.

Method 5/6ish - Making strange noises and saying strange things.

BO! I bet that scared you didn't it little baby. Wah wah wah, split milk. Why don't you go to Jareth and ask for baby noise making lessons?

I really liked that ending. :-)

I agree, this is definitely what should have happened at the end. Beautifully written!

Its a nice, happy ending for a starkly dramatic movie. Well done