Not a bad oneshot but I think it would be better if it was a short story. You should add more since as you said...there isn't a point to it. But nonetheless it would is a great start to a story.

I like the fact you included both views too ]

It' wasn't that bad to be honest. from and A to an F-, i think ur story earned a C

i liked it really good sad ending tho but thats wat is good about it sappy ending *sniff*sniff

im going to go listen some sad music now

'my immortal first (damn good song

this one is good a little bit on the woah side but i would flame you except i ran out of amo and i have my "slave" getting me some more but in the mean time i just have some comments to give you so yeah um... yeah
well ja ne!
JAMO _

i'll say it again, i liked the story and you shouldn't be so hard on yourself. *sigh* But i don't think it matters, so i'll shut uo down.

i'm wondering who it is that Tai likes. It just seems so strange for him to like someone other than Matt or someone not on the team. And there aren't many choices for him. If you were to continue this, would it be an au character?

Anyway, thanks for posting this online. *smiles brightly*

*sighs and rools eyes* You know, you really shouldn't be so hard on yourself. and if you're doing it for attention, it isn't working. your story doesn't suck and it has a point. it's to get the two together or keep them apart. and besides, telling his father was the smartest thing he could've done at the time. it cured him somewhat of the inner tumoil he was feeling.

so don't continue to say that the story sucked, because it didn't. you're probably a perfectionist and don't like it too much, but don't be too hard on something that you worked hard on. it could only end up making you sad.

i liked it. don't know why you think it's so bad. i wish it could have ended on a happier note, i like angst but don't like sad endings wierd huh. any it was good you should write more maybe from tai's pov.

Awwe, this story was so sweet and so sad! I don't think it sucked!

Well, another great story by you, and I am impressed. I love your ideas, and I just wanted to say: you are an awesome writer and that is why you are on my fav list. Anyway, I especially love that other story with that rapist raping Tai and Matt. Great job!

Sure, it was pointless, kinda reminded me of "I am who I am and that's Taichi Kamiya", which was really really good...I dunno, it was short and sweet I guess...cute

Poor Matt! It's good his dad was so understanding, but... *growls and kicks Tai* Why couldn't you like him back, goggle boy? *fumes* Excellent fic! _

ohhhh that was good! It was! I swear! Sweatdrops I just can't think of a good enough compliment for it... Oh i know! ::::: INSERT COMPLIMENT HERE ::::: There we go, now you can think of a great compliment and I don't have to look like a fool for not knowing a simple compliment! OH WAIT! I do know that I have read lots of your work and that you are an awesome author and that you are on my FAV. authors list... does that count as a compliment? shrugs oh well. famous LadyLyra grin

Don't insult your story so. I was on the verge of tears myself. Perhaps it's the unrequited love deal... Anyway, it was creative making it through Mr. Ishida's eyes. It's great seeing him as a good role model instead of an abusive man. Wonderful work with this idea!

I wasn't expecting Mr. Ishida's POV...but it made the story so much coolor. You're a taito/yamachi fanatic aren't you? Welcome to the club..hehe. I loved this fic...9/10

I like it, even though I totally feel sorry for Matt. He should have gotten with Tai. Poor Matt. But the point of the story was cool, so don't worry about it. I'm sure plenty of people liked it.