Hey! Love this pairing, and can't wait to read the next chapter! My advice is to watch out for the little mistakes, for example

“Well I may be good friends with Ash, but if you want this badge.” Your going to have to earn it. She said it as harshly as she could trying to get her anger across to the girl.

I do it all the time, and all my friends as well. But good job so far. I'm excited for chapter 2 :)

Your fanfic's like a box of chocolates. You never know what youre gonna get.

This is good stuff. my one recomendation would be to watch closly where you put the "" marks as a couple of times you put them infront of bits that are obviusly ment to be part of the spoken sentence. that however is a minor mistake that every author including myself falls prey to. (actually i do it alot have have to reread/correct my work aleast 3 times before i can post it) Again good stuff and i hope to see more good stuff from you in the future