Hm... That was an unexpected twist. Certainly gives me reason to axiously await the next part of the Saga. BTW--like the characterization of Lance. And the rest of the Brotherhood, but Lance especially. It isn't too ofter they're depicted as copetant/caring towards their own. Congrats.

Guthrie! Yee-ha! Great character writing, by the way. I had him pegged by about the fifth paragraph. heh-heh... Knew it'd be a New Mutant...

*SCREAMS* NOOOOOOOO!! Sam can't go the 'hood, it's not FAIR! What about poor Wolfie!? He hurt her feelings, she's all depressed now! It was a good chap, really it was, you portrayed the fight scenes well, but... NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!! *coughs* Ok, calm now.

*cackles* I /LUV/ this. Keep it up, Aderyn! Dooooooooooooon't stoooooooop....

~Does a happy dance.~ It was great, Aderyn! ~Hugs you.~ Yay! I've been sated for the time being, but that won't last long. If you ever need any words of encouragement, just lemme know 'cause I've got plenty ready and waiting for you! Now... ~Tessa steeples her fingers~ when's the conclusion gonna be finished, 'cause I'm ready to read it! ~cringes when you glare at her~ What? I told you it wouldn't last long!

yes!!! I've been waiting SO long for this part 2! Can't wait till the ending :)

AUGH! Nooooooo, don't hurt him, evil, evil Friends of Humanity. *whaps all the members with trout* Leave 'em alone! *coughs* Calm now. Moving on. Reeeeeally good so far, verrae suspenseful. *creepsies over to next chap*

Interesting story...I wonder if they should have Rahne/Wolvesbane as a character on X-Men Evolution and Sam Guthrie/Cannonball and Paige/Husk on the show....

/KEWLNESS!/ I don't know/recognize any characters so far, nor do I have a /clue/ what the ending of the chap was... but that's ok. I'm still enjoying this. A very intriguing beginning! I love the way you write his thoughts in to explain the plot. =D

I like! Sam's a very entertaining character, who I'd like to know more about. I loved the cooperation between groups. very cool. :) ~Rachel~