 irondragonsll 2008-02-18 . chapter 2I love how you changed the characters, like how spinner's gay (never woulda seen that coming). lol. |
 craftyns99 2007-11-27 . chapter 22read in one sitting and the drama had me gripped all the way. loved the different POV |
 JN426 2007-08-18 . chapter 22love it |
 SpeedingCars8 2007-07-12 . chapter 4Manny is really annoying. I got all excited as soon as Ellie showed up in the story because she's the only character I really like on the show. And that would just be an awesome couple.
I like the length of your chapters. The chapters in some of your other stories were really long and it was hard to remember everything I wanted to say in the reviews. But in this story they're not too short and not too long.
I noticed you definitely use all dialogue (for the most part) in this story...so far. Obviously I'm not that far into it. I found that I use pretty much...no dialogue. Maybe just a tiny bit but I just explain things instead. But I think dialogue is good for fanfiction obviously because it makes it more like watching the show. And dialogue usually isn't boring, it keeps the readers attention, etc. |
 SpeedingCars8 2007-07-12 . chapter 3Ew Emma that **.
And Ashley is such an idiot in this story from what you've written so far. Wonder how Sean would react to that. I think that's a creepy couple though. I haven't made up my mind about Craig and Emma though. I don't know. I have to read more to have opinions about that.
Okay I'll probably read more sometime soon. I like it so far. |
 SpeedingCars8 2007-07-12 . chapter 2I liked this chapter too. I think I like Craig's POV the most though. I like everything that's going on except I really don't like Manny (and I laughed about her 'opening up') and Sean/Ashley is going to take some getting used to...
And here comes Paige. Ah.
Well I can't really make too many assumptions yet even though I do have some predictions but I'll find out once I read more chapters.
It's weird that Marco is straight. Everybody is different (for the most part) so I won't be used to that until a few more chapters but that's alright. I like Alex's character even though the POV's for her and Craig are really similar sounding. That's fine though because they're twins. They both just have the same tone and stuff. Well Craig is a little bit lighter though.
Yeah I'm liking the name Equality Club better. Even though transsexuals usually has nothing to do with sexual preference, it's usually more about sexual identity. But it works anyway because bisexuals have to fit in there somewhere. Although they shouldn't really care about the name, like Alex said.
Anyway, I like the way you changed up the characters and the couple situations. This should be interesting. I'm off to read more chapters soon. |
 SpeedingCars8 2007-07-12 . chapter 1Well I liked the first chapter. I like that you used what I think are the only two pretty girls on Degrassi, besides Darci, because I'm not a huge fan of Paige and Ashley finally looks like a gremlin to me now.
I really like the relationship you made between Craig & Alex although I used to think of them as a potentially good couple.
I'm curious to see what happens next. I'll have to read more chapters soon. |
 CourtiePie 2007-07-11 . chapter 7so i really like your story but i hate alex/ellie lol so...your writing is awesome and you deserve more reviews than you are getting! |
 NickyFox13 2007-07-11 . chapter 21Sorry I didn't review this earlier.
Craig visited Spinner. Too bad it didn't work out so well...It ended up in a fight no less!
Poor Alex, had to starve herself to feel good and even by barely eating, she felt bad. UGH! It must suck so hard to feel rejected to that extreme.
-grins at Ellie kissing Alex-
Well, we can deduce they'll be happy...
Anyway, I *love* this story, and really enjoyed this chapter.
*pouts* I can't believe the next chapter is the last one. Will enjoy it while it lasts though. |
 NickyFox13 2007-07-09 . chapter 20Ack, Jay is so sweet to Paige. Glad to see that she seems all right for now.
Evil Ashley, she had to, as you said, 'oh so graciously' give Craig an STD. He's going to be okay despite that, right? I'll continue to be optimistic and say that Craig's going to live life! And poor guy, has to struggle so hard to find his sexuality. I hope he overcomes that as well, but I'm overly optimistic and I know he'll be fine one way or another
Thanks for telling me that Ellie wasn't talking to Alex last chapter, I must have misread the PoV at the begining. Finally, Ellie calls! It's about time. Poor Alex, she's so nervous, but hey, it's only natural.
Manny and Marco are back together! Woo! And Manny is happily at her foster parent's home...right? Yeah.
Back to Craig...aww, he likes Spinner! It's cute...I hope they get together.
Okay, I'd write more, but all I have to say now is: I loved this chapter and loved all (or at least some) of the drama resolved. I love your writing, it's amazing. I hope you update soon. |
 WP 2007-07-09 . chapter 20It was awesome, faultless. You've created a really interesting universe which Alex and Craig being twins and Marco being straight works. Really enjoying all the story lines. Update soon. |
 anon. 2007-07-09 . chapter 20 I love this fic, despite the lack of Palex and the amount of Elex. But I'll get over that. |
 NickyFox13 2007-07-04 . chapter 19Aw, poor Craig. He's struggling with his sexuality. That must suck so badly *offers Craig cookie*
Yay, Manny is in foster care and all right. Well, except for the bruises, but they heal.
*does happy dance, because Ellie and Alex are friends again*
Oh, no, something bad is going to happen to Emma! I wonder who the mystery man is...Update soon, I want to know what happens with Emma! |
 OTH305Degrassi305 2007-07-03 . chapter 19 PLEASE...CONTINUE SOON. I LOVE THE MANNY/JAY/MARCO/PAIGE STUFF! MORE MANNY AND MARCO! |
 JN426 2007-06-28 . chapter 18love it keep it up |