That was sweet, and great not-drawn out revelation story. Keep writing!

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BUNNY

Cute tale. Rather smooth transition from Richard to Clark. Well done. BTW besides "Dad" & "Daddy", "Papa" and "Pop" are also well known terms for a father.

Oh my...

I would have never imagined Lois like that!

I liked this fic, I really did. I love Jason, and the way he seems to take things so easily, so joyfully.

I really like your fic!

wow. Just wow.

you seriously cant just leave it like that! you really should do a sequel. superb job on this story.

That was an amazing story. I really loved how I could actually hear their voices when they spoke. I don't think I have ever read a story where it starts when Lois already knows his identity (and it wasn't something that was a future fic.).

I like how you managed to explain the scope of the Clark Kent/ Superman identity tangle as well. How he feels guilty about his distraction when he is just being human when he could be out there saving people's lives. Very nice.

Thanks for sharing!

Rhea

Aww! Excellent fic! Loved it!

this was a cute story.

I just found this story and I loved it! Great Job!

Mac

great story!

Yay! Martrha loves her, she really loves her! hehe

This story was awesome! I'm so glad it had a happy ending!

Jason is so smart, he's so cute, just imagining that scene where he takes Clarks glasses off is so heartwarming, aww. ITS SO AMAZING!

Ok, Jason is in for quite a shock. Poor little guy – he's really too young to understand. His daddy is his daddy, that's all he knows. He won't understand at first. But, in time, Lois is right, he will come around to Clark. Can't wait for your next installment.

i absolutely loved the part where the three adults sit down with Jason and tell him who his real father is. the end with martha kent getting teary eyed because she's finally going to meet jason was so cute and heartfelt. great story telling.

Wonderful story. Thank you! I loved that Clark's favorite book was To Kill a Mockingbird. That was so fitting. You have a real command of the characters and their subtleties.

And the scene of Jason tracing the lines around Clark's face where the glasses had been- excellent.

Now that you are done with this get to work on a Fallen update! You're killing me.

nice chapter