 C.Lovebug 10/20/07 . chapter 1I swear i remember reviewing to this story when you posted it.
I loved the writing style for this one.The first time I read it,I didn't understand it that well,maybe cause my sister was right next to me,squishing me,but now that i read it again,alone,i understand it way better. I like that you had Katara dead(ugh,that sounds mean) it's reasonable and it helps us understand the ending,"and the sound of a widower’s cries piercing the night in an empty temple." It was a very sad story.The narrator doesn't really need a name,he speaks for himself( i hope that made sense,lol).A couple more like these wouldn't be bad ;). |
 Winnywriter 10/15/07 . chapter 1So...god.
THAT WAS AMAZING! |
 Lily Dragon 6/27/07 . chapter 1Have I already asked you if you've heard Villa Lobos? If so, I advise you again to hear it... I don't know if you enjoy classical music, but...
Anyway, it almost made me cry. Gah, the end was so Moulin-Rouge like... Not that it was bad, I just could almost hear "the greatest thing you'll ever learn / is just love and be loved in return"
Nhai... Poor Aang. This is one of the few fanfics with Aang being older than twenty, thirty years old, quite interesting.
Anyway, I think you'll be hearing a lot of me, as you have so many Avatar stories... GOOD avatar stories
Cheers!
L.D. |
 Sakae Kashiwagi 6/4/07 . chapter 1I almost cried. |
 Puridan 4/17/07 . chapter 1Cool that was really great.. I dont really get how old Aang actually is.. But anyhow its really great and sweet in smoe way.. Aang seem to be an honorable man (like anyone ever doubted it...)And kind too... I think it is very fine with not giving the narrator a name.. It makes me more likely to see just how important and honorable this meeting are... I understand why you felt that making Katara die was the most reasonable, but i could still see the meaning if Aang left the tavern to go home to his wife... But anyway i love this drabble ;) |
 chocolatecoveredbananacheese 3/12/07 . chapter 1WAHH! That was awesome and so SAAD! Katara died! WAH! |
 Nafien 2/20/07 . chapter 1Very nice, I enjoyed the different style. I would have prefered Katara not dying, but it does make far more sense this way. Great job, will you be writing anymore in this manner? |
 sammo56 2/9/07 . chapter 1wow...actually this is one of my favorite stories about the avatar series, keep writing your a great author |
 Kumori Doragon 2/8/07 . chapter 1That was a bittersweet fic and I loved it. Very nice. And I think it's better that the narrator doesn't have a name. I think it personalizes it more, if you know what I mean. If you don't... well, just consider it the ramblings of Kumori Doragon.
KD |
 UNDER-CITY WALLS 2/8/07 . chapter 1I think that htis story is awesome, you should definitely continue to write in this style. |
 smc1214 2/8/07 . chapter 1Wow, that was amazing! I never thought of a story when Aang is looking back on this time with someone else. Very intersting! and sad. |
 Aangsfan 2/7/07 . chapter 1Whoa...*heavy sigh*...that wuz depressing... |
 Liselle129 2/7/07 . chapter 1I liked it. Sometimes different is good. It reminded me a bit of the country song "The Good Stuff." Sorry I can't remember who recorded it. |
 frozenheat 2/7/07 . chapter 1Ack! You made me cry again!
I dont where these ideas come to you from, but I'm glad they do. You come up with the most wonderful stories.
Another brilliant one-shot. |
 libowie 2/6/07 . chapter 1Oh my, this was one of the best stories i've ever read!
I really hope that one day i can write like this, it was amazing, and the very last sentance got me!
This was so awesome, thanks so much for writing it! |