I liked it, I just had one question. If the moon was full, how was Lupin asleep in the infirmary? Doesnt really make sense.
~*KeEp On RoCkEn, FashionDiva7*~

This fic was really, really good. I loved the details. The whole thing gave me chills, especially the way your style seemed so careful, you know? Not rushed at all, not shouting out the obvious message. It fit very well with McGonagall's character, too.

I like it.

Wow...this is incredable. Its so well written and it contains a real sense of forboding!

This is great. Truly. Deep, sinister, heartwreaking... infuriating)
Very good work, thank you for sharing, lesyeuxverts.
Best wishes.

You've wowed me! This is very original and well done. By the way, I discovered it thanks to a rec at accio_rs_fics on live journal.

Really interesting piece! Sometimes I struggled with the time changes, but all in all I really really enjoyed it. Great work... very dark and deep but somehow it wasn't completely depressing. I also love that you set up the Pensieve scene as being a redo of something that Snape started!

Well, wow. That's left me incoherent with admiration. (Ignore the contradiction, if you will.)
And... wow.

Wow this was REALLY good, I can't put into words how great this story was, really, just that I could never write anything as good as this ever and I love how you portrayed Minerva and how everything got tied in together and everything was just perfect and...wow.

Well, anyway, excellent story!

I loved the way this was written. It had an almost ethereal kind of beauty in it, and the ending was rather dark, but that's what made this so enticing. A very interesting and awesome read, if I do say so myself. Insightful and emotional. Well done.

I like it! The characterization is really good, and everyone seems realistic. (At least realistic for Harry Potter...) Good job!
-Morsmordre

This is well-written, but it tells us nothing about canon - at least, nothing true. I'm curious as to why you chose to reverse the victim-bully in the underpants scene and why you made the Marauders so shaky at Transfiguration when it must be one of their best subjects (apart from Lupin, perhaps.) Even Peter is an Animagus by this stage, and it doesn't make sense to suggest he could master that - the pinnacle of the art - yet do so poorly at the goose spell.

The timing, of course, is wrong, but worse than that, it makes nonsense of canon. Snape's Worst Memory happened after the Defence O.W.L., which could have been at most a few days after this. How could Lily possibly have asked James why he was picking on Snape with this spell if she had witnessed Snape inflicting it on James a few days earlier? And why would James have answered, "the fact of his existence," if the obvious answer had been, "I'm just giving him back his own?"

beautiful

This was so sad and haunting. I thought that your writing style was absolutely excellent for this piece.

*Shudders*
I really liked it. Very nicely done.
"shutting out the moonlight and the omens"