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anonymous
2008-10-04 . chapter 1
It was really good

And i actually kind of like your writing style; its very...poetic a little intense sometims but very poetic

Write more Jasper/Alice fanfics they need more attention anyway

Good Job!
Naomi93
2008-09-14 . chapter 1
oh my gosh! that was so cute! i love those two!! ur story was so adorable!! oh my gosh!! i FINALLY finished breaking dawn today! sorry i'm anoucning it to everyone!! anyways love it!!
Ambrosien
2008-07-16 . chapter 1
This is so sweet! I can definitely picture the first meeting between Alice and Jasper as something like this. Great job ;)
Oxygen.and.Cucumber
2008-03-02 . chapter 1
haha, great story! I like your style of writing, it's very... descriptvie and imaginative... xD
Pyromaniac-Girl
2007-10-21 . chapter 1
That was a really cool story!! Alice is such a great dancer!! I am glad that Jasper did not kill himself!!
d666lisa
2007-10-11 . chapter 1
Brilliant :-)
jasperrocksyoursocksoff
2007-07-12 . chapter 1
that was beautiful. please make more.
Ladybuguboo
2007-02-08 . chapter 1
That was VERY different, but good. And i liked the style of writing!
Hersheys Rocks
2007-02-07 . chapter 1
Beautiful ^.~ One of the few (but growing in number) AlicexJasper fics, there needs to be more, especially like yours. I like the way you described Alice, almost too perfectly ^o^ Loved it over all
Be Kat
2007-02-07 . chapter 1
Heaven Help me! I read stuff like yours, and think, how did I ever hallucinate I could write! ;-) You have a gift, and your story shows it.
BigEnoughUmbrella
2007-02-07 . chapter 1
Great job! I enjoyed it!
CanoeingCutie
2007-02-07 . chapter 1
oh! I love this! You write so beautifully :-)
cnohero
2007-02-06 . chapter 1
Holly Crow! This is really beautiful writing. I don't think it's wacked out at all. Its very poetic and well composed. Two tumbs up
Warui-Usagi
2007-02-06 . chapter 1
Beautiful. Really, that's the only word I can use to describe this. Great job. :)
shobbs
2007-02-06 . chapter 1
Wow. I imagine thats how Jasper felt when he met Alice.
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