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| Ambrosien 2008-07-16 ch 1,  | abuseThis is so sweet! I can definitely picture the first meeting between Alice and Jasper as something like this. Great job ;) |
| Oxygen.and.Cucumber 2008-03-02 ch 1, | abusehaha, great story! I like your style of writing, it's very... descriptvie and imaginative... xD |
| Pyromaniac-Girl 2007-10-21 ch 1, | abuseThat was a really cool story!! Alice is such a great dancer!! I am glad that Jasper did not kill himself!! |
| d666lisa 2007-10-11 ch 1, | abuseBrilliant :-) |
| jasperrocksyoursocksoff 2007-07-12 ch 1, | abusethat was beautiful. please make more. |
| Ladybuguboo 2007-02-08 ch 1, | abuseThat was VERY different, but good. And i liked the style of writing! |
| Hersheys Rocks 2007-02-07 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful ^.~ One of the few (but growing in number) AlicexJasper fics, there needs to be more, especially like yours. I like the way you described Alice, almost too perfectly ^o^ Loved it over all |
| Be Kat 2007-02-07 ch 1, | abuseHeaven Help me! I read stuff like yours, and think, how did I ever hallucinate I could write! ;-) You have a gift, and your story shows it. |
| JohnMayer1207 2007-02-07 ch 1, | abuseGreat job! I enjoyed it! |
| CanoeingCutie 2007-02-07 ch 1, | abuseoh! I love this! You write so beautifully :-) |
| cnohero 2007-02-06 ch 1, | abuseHolly Crow! This is really beautiful writing. I don't think it's wacked out at all. Its very poetic and well composed. Two tumbs up |
| Warui-Usagi 2007-02-06 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful. Really, that's the only word I can use to describe this. Great job. :) |
| shobbs 2007-02-06 ch 1, | abuseWow. I imagine thats how Jasper felt when he met Alice. |
| fanficaddict21 2007-02-06 ch 1, | abuseAw I loved this oneshot!! It was so amazing...I want someone like that. I've been dating a guy for a year and I love him...but nothing like that happened. I love him though; I'm afraid that if I let him go in search of something like what Alice and Jasper, or Carlisle and Esme, or Emmett and Rosalie, or Bella and Edward have, I'll have given up the closest I could ever get to that kind of love... |