It was really good

And i actually kind of like your writing style; its very...poetic a little intense sometims but very poetic

Write more Jasper/Alice fanfics they need more attention anyway

Good Job!

oh my gosh! that was so cute! i love those two!! ur story was so adorable!! oh my gosh!! i FINALLY finished breaking dawn today! sorry i'm anoucning it to everyone!! anyways love it!!

This is so sweet! I can definitely picture the first meeting between Alice and Jasper as something like this. Great job ;)

haha, great story! I like your style of writing, it's very... descriptvie and imaginative... xD

That was a really cool story!! Alice is such a great dancer!! I am glad that Jasper did not kill himself!!

Brilliant :-)

that was beautiful. please make more.

That was VERY different, but good. And i liked the style of writing!

Beautiful ^.~ One of the few (but growing in number) AlicexJasper fics, there needs to be more, especially like yours. I like the way you described Alice, almost too perfectly ^o^ Loved it over all

Heaven Help me! I read stuff like yours, and think, how did I ever hallucinate I could write! ;-) You have a gift, and your story shows it.

Great job! I enjoyed it!

oh! I love this! You write so beautifully :-)

Holly Crow! This is really beautiful writing. I don't think it's wacked out at all. Its very poetic and well composed. Two tumbs up

Beautiful. Really, that's the only word I can use to describe this. Great job. :)

Wow. I imagine thats how Jasper felt when he met Alice.