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Kaydreams 2/20/12 . chapter 1
Too cute! I had a smile on my face though the entire thing!
KoiGirlPGSM 8/24/11 . chapter 1
nice
SheSellsSeaShellsByTheSeaShore 9/18/09 . chapter 1
Ha! That was awesome, yet so so cute. Loved!
Miles333 10/11/08 . chapter 1
*ROFL* Poor Bats! Everyone always dumps their stuff on him! Awesome ending. I love a good BM/WW story! XD
JoPoGirlsKickAss 7/20/08 . chapter 1
that was so cute

loved it

10/10 :)
alinaandalion 2/18/07 . chapter 1
Very cute and sweet fluff. I enjoyed it very much and am looking forward to you writing more JL stories in the future.
Rhea Jediknight 2/15/07 . chapter 1
This was a truly beautiful story. I loved it. Very short and sweet. So are there any plans to write a continuation?
queenoflanval 2/10/07 . chapter 1
Awesome fic! I laughed when the others had to ask Batman for favors; wonderfully written and very IC. The dance was even bittersweet for me, but at least he has a chance to make it up to her. Great job!
Kyoko Kasshu Minamino 2/9/07 . chapter 1
100 percent adorable.
WonWoman Diana 2/8/07 . chapter 1
This is a really nice little story. Thanks for writing it. Poor bruce...

Diana
Lavender Gaia 2/8/07 . chapter 1
That was so cute! Bruce is so sneaky. This was a very nice Valentine's Day fic. Thank you for writing it.
LarSinger 2/7/07 . chapter 1
Wanted to comment on this earlier, but couldn't because of FFN mess-ups. But I really liked this. It was supremely cute and romantic. Who knew Batman had it in him? :o)

Great Job!
Lorendiac 2/7/07 . chapter 1
I liked it. Let me mention one bit that caught me by surprise, though:

* "I was hoping," she started in a forced calm voice, "that you and I would be able to do something tonight, that is until I was informed by, first Flash, then Clark, then J'onn and finally Shayera, that you had agreed to take all their shifts for today, tonight and tomorrow morning." She leaned forward and rested her elbows on her knees. "Twenty-four hours of monitor duty, Bruce?" She straightened up, placed her left hand on his right shoulder and asked in a whisper, "Do I scare you that much?" *

I was very surprised by her reaction, because I didn't expect her to take this change in shift scheduling so personally. I wouldn't think Valentine's Day specifically - as opposed to any other day when she could plan to spend some quality time with someone she really liked - would be such a big deal to her. I mean, Bruce grew up in a culture where boys and girls associate a certain day of the year with romance, above all other days of the year, but Diana grew up in a culture descended from Classical Greece, right? Totally different experience! She probably never even HEARD of "Valentine's Day" until after she became a founding member of the League!

(I guess she's getting assimilated into American culture awfully fast, though?)

Incidentally, I ended up with the conviction that the League DESPERATELY needs to hire some sort of "temps" or "pinch-hitter heroes" or whatever to handle monitor duty for them instead of requiring the regular membership to stand watches all the time, especially on holidays, if they are currently so short-handed that everybody and his brother couldn't find any way to make things fit except by pestering Batman to fill in for them. What if he had been honestly unable to make that commitment because he had some really serious business to attend to in Gotham that just couldn't wait? (Catching the Joker again, or whatever.)

Granted, you made it pretty clear that one reason Flash - and probably the others - all picked on Batman was their general ASSUMPTION that he couldn't possibly be planning anything "romantic" for Valentine's Day, the way several other JLAers were, therefore he was "fair game" for a sudden request to switch shifts! Always interesting to know what your friends really think of you, isn't it? ("'Batman'? 'Social life'? Don't be silly, guys - those two concepts are diametrically opposed!")
butterflyV 2/7/07 . chapter 1
You ought to do a sequel to this to see if the others can actually keep their end of the agreement to Batman, and also his and Diana's weekend in Paris. Great stuff.
Daxo 2/7/07 . chapter 1
muahahaha yes i love master plans

he is a genius

you are a genius

i was great i cant wait for another holiday

ok bye
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