The way you write Ash is hilarious. His words string on and I LOVE IT.

I am a die-hard Gymshipper, but you made me feel a little sorry for him.

*faves*

Well done. And compared to most of the Pokemon stories out there, amazingly fantastical.

I do feel a little sorry for Ash, though. Poor guy.. he had no chance. :).

poor ash..:( haha! :) great story!

GO BROCK! misty... nice story!

Aw, what a sad story!

You know, you've done a fine job explaining how Brock and Misty could get together and learn from each other. The scenario you've set up is believable and beautifully agonizing. There aren't many good Pokemon fics out there, but this one's going into Favorites.

wow

this is really good, and i dont normally read pokemon fics either, but friend recommended this to me. and i must say...well, i aint got much to say except that it was really good!

this is so really good! i love this...

evil! poor ash lol anyways good work with the fic i still think brock/misty is evil!

How Misty must have really cried when Brock stayed w/ Professor Ivy...mmm, you write Brock/Misty so beautifully! I can really imagine this happening. I never liked Ash, but now I feel the slightest bit sorry for him-only the slightest bit, mind. ;)

Gonna go read the others...

Tahlya/TPR on the SugarQuill

aww..you know, everytime i've visited your little bio, i've always seen this fic, but never bothered to check it out. and i regret that, but it's so amazing! you should write more fics like this..although i'm more of a AAM kinda person, i occasionally check out fics of some other couple... and here are the comments...

sugoi! totemo kawaii desu!

*Pheep the Ash and Misty shipper breaks down crying on the floor*GAH!x.x*Twitch*

Ash's POV was sweet and cute, without going OOC. Well done _

That is oh-so-totally sad... *sniff* poor Ashy-boy... waah...

Wow thats so sad... I really like it though. I just wish favrites was up so I

could put this on mine.