Wow. Not in the good way.

PS: I'm really curious as to what "gorramit" is. Shed some light onto this wonderful topic.
PPS: Learn your grammar skills, plzplz.

OMG I loved this chapter! It's so sad about Moira dying and her and Kaylin's sad past!! I hope things brighten up for them soon! I still say, more romance! :D UPDATE SOON!

You're my favorite writer on this site! Don't take any ** from people like that! This story's great so far. Please update soon. Maybe a little more Kaylin/Jayne action going on, if you get my drift. And remember, smut always does a story justice! ;)

Okay, because writing yourself into some TV show is completely imaginative. Thanks for clearing that up.

Ew. This is really ** bad.

hm..interesting. Looking forward to the next chapter. Just don't make her a Mary Sue. Thanks.