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| Haruka-Hime 2008-03-16 ch 1,  | abuseNice story |
| personart 2007-10-31 ch 1, | abuseThat was so good and hilarious. I am a bit reluctant about accepting Sakura as a flower thought I lik her. Anyway you've done a great job! |
| Kisa Masaki-san 2007-07-14 ch 1, | abuseNice story. I liked it a whole lot ^.^ |
| Yaoishallruletheworld 2007-04-18 ch 1, | abuseWow that was really good in my opion I think you should right more. Oh well gret story to. |
| obsequiouslover 2007-02-21 ch 1, | abuseCan you say 'yum'? Lol, you did great! And you say that was your first?! I can barely believe it. You have got to write more SasuNaru fics, especially lemons! The SasuNaru fanfiction world needs good writers like you. ^_^ Good work! |
| Alley-Oop 2007-02-19 ch 1, | abuseI thought both this story and the one before it was wonderful. I'm not really in the mood for a huge, long reply, but I thought it was splendid. Great job. |
| shiinx2 2007-02-12 ch 1, | abuseI kinda liked it, lemon and all... to my liking naruto should have been little bit more uke... great!! ^^ |
| DaysGoBy 2007-02-09 ch 1, | abusehehe ^^ for your first yaoi lemon that was really good ^^ yay! *claps* keep writing! :D |
| pyro-manic19 2007-02-09 ch 1, | abusei wanna stay with sasuke or naruto for the night... |
| DragonWingsOfTheElements 2007-02-09 ch 1, | abuseWow that was your first Yaoi?! It was amazing I loved it, i couldn't tell that it wasn't your first! |
| aa 2007-02-08 ch 1, anon. | abuseHahaha that was great. Sakura should get a life |
| tenten1993 2007-02-08 ch 1, | abuseit wasnt that bad actuly it could use some work but the problem was that you werent in to it so it through off your story well i liked so ja ne |
| Mi-chan 2007-02-08 ch 1, anon. | abuseare u kidding me? that was amazing! for not knowing how to right a yoai lemon, you hit the hammer right on the nail! i really hope you rethink the whole 'i'll never do one again'. wow... just, wow. Mi-chan =3 |
| Aisu Tenshi 2007-02-08 ch 1, | abuseYou WILL write more lemons. |
| BlackEyedWicca 2007-02-08 ch 1, | abuselol i know how you feel the first time i did a yaoi lemon i was like 'oh god, someone kill me' it took me 4 FRIGGIN EVER to write!! Still yours was good, i mean it being your first and all also since you seemed a little uncomfortable doing it anywho it was real good :) I like the rest of the story as well Great Job :D Luv BEW |