Great!

you should write more...it was a good one but can you tell me if they feel love or just lust for eachother?will sasuke stay with naru or he will marry a girl(NO PLASE!!)i oftenly put mant questions so dont kill me...XD answer please?-puppy eyes

Nice story

That was so good and hilarious. I am a bit reluctant about accepting Sakura as a flower thought I lik her. Anyway you've done a great job!

Nice story. I liked it a whole lot ^.^

Wow that was really good in my opion I think you should right more. Oh well gret story to.

Can you say 'yum'? Lol, you did great! And you say that was your first?! I can barely believe it. You have got to write more SasuNaru fics, especially lemons! The SasuNaru fanfiction world needs good writers like you. ^_^ Good work!

I thought both this story and the one before it was wonderful. I'm not really in the mood for a huge, long reply, but I thought it was splendid. Great job.

I kinda liked it, lemon and all... to my liking naruto should have been little bit more uke... great!! ^^

hehe ^^ for your first yaoi lemon that was really good ^^ yay! *claps* keep writing! :D

i wanna stay with sasuke or naruto for the night...

Wow that was your first Yaoi?! It was amazing I loved it, i couldn't tell that it wasn't your first!

Hahaha that was great. Sakura should get a life

it wasnt that bad actuly it could use some work but the problem was that you werent in to it so it through off your story well i liked so ja ne

are u kidding me? that was amazing! for not knowing how to right a yoai lemon, you hit the hammer right on the nail! i really hope you rethink the whole 'i'll never do one again'.

wow... just, wow.

Mi-chan =3