Nice writing - Neville's thoughts are coming through very well.

Just started reading, love it. Neville is the man. Can't wait for more.

I'm so glad you decided to update! This was one of my favorite stories and I was hoping you would decide to keep up with it. This was another excellent chapter; you really captured the feeling of those after-funeral parties and what it's like to be at one. I look forward to seeing more in the future; thank you for updating!

Mandy

wow, Bellatrix will be in a world of pain and death ...soon. judging by how neville feels...

This was good. And appropriate. I liked how Neville was portrayed here and how Draco and Snape were 'reluctant' to help... as in you're not positing as to their future loyalties. Nice touch. And I love Bellatrix and it is so HER to do exactly what you had her do here. She's mad as a hatter- and if she went to do something insane like that, Rodolphus would go with her, and Rabastan would go with Rodolphus. Very well written and enjoyable.
-MQ

Poor Neville! You are showing his intelligence and perseverance well.

Holy WOW this is some EXCELLENT writing. I was just as engrossed as I am with the books. I'm majoring in English/Writing actually so it's great to see someone else who sincerely pursues it. I hope you continue with this story because even in its first chapter it has me hooked.

Aw. :( Poor Neville. He's always been my favorite character. And now his parents aren't just insane, they're dead.