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| Wish the Pain Away 2008-03-13 ch 1,  | abuseYou make them sound like little kids. It's kind of random too. |
| ania 2007-03-17 ch 1, anon. | abuseNot bad... a little confusing though. Update soon. |
| kathleen212 2007-02-07 ch 1, anon. | abuseOk, lightly disturbing... Well written though |