this is so cute

I like this story, nice plot. Keep it up.

Can you create a sequel for this fic. Where Zane and Syrus's relationship is going strong. However Iva, their mom, is not too happy about it due to the incestuous part and will do anything to protect her younger son, even if it means doing some harm to Zane or something like that.

Loved the story and the characters.

You ever going to create a sequel. where it produces several flashbacks with Iva and the Truesdale brothers?

Kay and what of Jaden and Chazz?

Ya ever gonna make a sequel from this?

Are you ever going to have a sequel and if you do. Cna you make it where after a few weeks or so, Sho and Ryo's mom comes for a visit. But then it turns out to be less than friendly when she finds out her two sons are in love with eachother. Can you even add a little flashback of Iva having more affection toward SHo than Ryo? thank you.

that was... okay.

Ha...I realised I put a spelling mistake (of an entire word) on my last review, so here I am to correct it:

SHE'S HIS (not my!) F*ING MOTHER?

There. With that out of the way, great story! I'm glad you skipped the duel (it made me laugh when you put '-Time Skip Of About 30 Minutes-') although I would have liked to see Shou and Zane's conversation in the way back that made them a couple. Keep up the writing and all!

ReaperRain

You cant end the story there just yet what about Juudai and Manjoume?

It seems like such a same to end it there. I like your new fic idea!

Gash: "O! I can't wait for 'Immortal Love' to come out! (squeals like a kitten and hugs her Syrus plushie tighyly)"

Manjoume: "Awkward..."

Shou: "Yup yup! _"

Now that we found out who Shou and Ryo's mom is, how do you suppose she'll deal with the fact of knowning that her older son is in love with his little brother. id say she will probably be furious.

Sure did!

*SQUEAL* Major cliffies make me HYPER! Update or I will end up destroying my house.

You're right. I did love that chapter. You rock once again.-bows- I don't usually do that but hey! I truly did love it. Can't wait (serioulsy can't) for the next one. Well done!