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aka hecate 2/18/02 . chapter 1
Gah...I love that.

So...perfect. ::claps::
Cheloya 10/5/01 . chapter 1
Wow. That was really good. I have only one question, though - why is a werewolf wearing a silver cross?
Darkwing 7/15/01 . chapter 1
kawaii :) For some reason I've always seen Lupin's parents as distant and scared of him, but this was very sweet
godforsaken 7/7/01 . chapter 1
i can't think of anything to say, as usual, but i'm reviewing to let u know that i read it and i liked it.
iLUVdraco 7/5/01 . chapter 1
I was actually CRYING while I was reading this. I mean, I never EVER cry during storied or movies. That was sooo sad, and soooo good. Perfect combination. I luv reading what you write. It is so...touching. It is just good. Undersatment...GREAT! You are an excellent writer. One day, you will become an author. You will make millions off your books, and you will deserve them. I know it. Keep writing!
Amethystia 7/5/01 . chapter 1
*sniffle* It was so good; talk about playing with people's heartstrings. It's gone on my faves list. I adore Moony, btw.
Imp 7/4/01 . chapter 1
Good Loopy, er, Lupin story. You haven't written for a while, have you? Well, nevermind, this was very interesting - I don't think people write much about Lupin's parents, or his times before Hogwarts. _
Luinthoron 7/4/01 . chapter 1
...what can I say... ...good... ... ... ... ...yes, good... ...sad but lovely...
D.M.P. 2 lazy to sign in 7/3/01 . chapter 1
stares at the screen, then bawls Why did you have to write such a sad fic for my birthday? _ sniff sniff Bt really, that was very good. I liked the little part about hiring a house elf to cook breakfast... sniff sniff Gawd, that was so sad! I'm writing one of the last chapters of my SoL fic right now, a really depressing part and this fic just ... sniff How come you said that you couldn't do Lupin well? I think this was great. _

-D.M.P.
tippy 7/3/01 . chapter 1
That was weird. And sad, and depressing. But really good! And well written, like everything you do. Made to be very depressing. Well, my sister's screaming at me, so that's all I have to say!
MeghanJinx 7/2/01 . chapter 1
Yay! That was so cool!
Mandy of the Amoeba 7/2/01 . chapter 1
Beautifully written...I don't know what else to say about this. It's just beautiful.
account gone 7/2/01 . chapter 1
Yet another angst masterpiece by Pikacheeka. You still amaze me every time. You've got to see Digimon, girl. You'll like it..trust me. Anyways...nice to see that you're still writting, while i've got writter's block. ;_;
magicallittleme 7/2/01 . chapter 1
I like her middle name. It suits the character you've created...And how Lupin's explaining everything to her like a little boy, like she can hear him. Lying for her sake...The last line's my favourite part. )
Paper Caper 7/2/01 . chapter 1
Hey, this is really good! Of course, we all know who Lupin *really* is though! j/k...hehehe "Remember Lucius?" Yes, he got another assignment from Voldie and had to quit his job! Well, I guess that's the price he pays for being a death eater. Haha sorry, I'm making a complete joke out of this...Anyways, really great fic!
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