I really liked the style of this one. Each paragraph flowed into the next beautifully, and the way each character's lines brougt the reader back to the other character was very nicely handled. Well done.

Aw. Kawaii. You would think that Riku would be into classical and Axel into rock. I liked it. It was great. XD

Oh, I liked it. Glad to see you up and about.

Never read this pairing before, but it's a good one.

And I liked this writing style. It's good.

Man! I love this!!
It's really well written, and just so fits the two!!
I'm glad your writing again... Wondered where you had gone...
But I'm glad your back now!
Keep up the awesome work!!
Good lucky!!

~Sai

*grins* this is awesome! i like teh new writing style, and AkuRiku is rare yet awesome! i love it, you did a good job! ^^

"But they always found time to set aside the newest paperback by a favorite author, or the favorite set of charcoal pencils simply begging to be used in order to just sit..." I think that was my favorite part. x3 It was just to pretty, and I loved the imagery that they were more important to each other than anything else.
:D Good job.

I think you did very well with this writing style! It flowed nicely. :D Not sure about the characterization at some points (ex: I imagine Axel as the loud, and Riku as the quiet), but that's more of a personal taste.

Good job! Thanks for sharing.

This is good. I like the theme of "opposites attract" in general, and Axel/Riku just makes it all the better.

Not half bad in my opinion :) There were a couple spots where I would have thought that the characteristics belonged to the other one, but you did really good with the style. Good job!

Aww, I think it's cute. The way you described them, I can see that as the way their personalities really are. All in all, I liked it. It's a good read when you're not looking for something uber fluffy, or angsty, or whatever. It's a good pairing too, although, I tend to like any pairing. Oh well, good job anyways.

Nice story! Although I imagined Riku liking the quiet and Axel being..well...fiery. Because Riku's The King of the Emos and Axel is The King of Wilderness. Or some sort.

Oi! So you're not dead! Glad to hear it. I've never read this pairing before, but of course you did a wonderful job with it. Love it!

That was really creative! I loved the rate teh story progressed at! Very well done~ You pulled off the writing style perfectly! ^_^
The last line was sweet and I think you've captured their different personalities very well!
*bliss*

This was excellent writing. but I'd say you're a little out of character. :)