Reviews for Love Hina: Berserker

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Thowell3 2008-04-13 ch 1,	abuseI like this Story Please Up date eventully.
Storyreader16 2008-01-29 ch 1,	abuseI am deaply enthralled by this story, and was curious to know if you would be continueing it, if not know that is it a very well written story and I will deeply miss it.
WayDrifter 2007-10-15 ch 1, anon.	abuseI love this story but when is the next chapter comming out? please finis it soon
hugoauthen 2007-06-17 ch 1,	abusewow. I really look forward for the uppdate on this ^_^
The light of darkness 2007-02-10 ch 1,	abuseI can't say which beserker story is better, but this is only one chapter to three. i'd like to see where this is going, even if it is along the same lines. update soon for us all please.
ace8488 2007-02-09 ch 1, anon.	abuseCool, good stuff, keep it coming! I like this spin on the story more than the last one. It has more detail, and it flows better. Good Luck ^_^
DufFan 2007-02-08 ch 1,	abusecool story! please update soon!
X2501 2007-02-08 ch 1,	abusePlease finish it, I'm in the edge of my seat!
Nysk 2007-02-08 ch 1,	abuseInteresting start... I do wonder where you will go from here
Ark12 2007-02-07 ch 1,	abusenice start. the new beginning is, as everyone mentioned, of better quality then the last. the pacing doesnt seem as rushed and people seem to fit more easily into their mold then the last one. i like the idea of the double marriage that you presented in the original berserker but thought that their reconcilling with each other was a bit quick. would have been fun too read if there was some sort of competition between motoko and tsuruko, like vying for keitaro's attention at first before they came full circle and all happy and such. anyways i love the story and am excited to read the next chapter wherever it may lead. looking forward to your next update. ark12
Jakinbandw 2007-02-07 ch 1,	abuseNice... Keep going!
Bobboky 2007-02-07 ch 1,	abuseif the contract did not cover what happened wouldn't the contract be void? anyways, i don't know much about Japanese culture so maybe they do things differently there than they do where i live. great chapter though and i look forward to more
crashtestdummy 2007-02-07 ch 1,	abuseSo far so good. I liked the original, but this made much more sense. Theres some problems i found though. The first is that Motoko doesn't call tsuruko by her name. She calls her ane-ue. And i don't recall them actually signing a contract for the terms of the duel. But its a ficfic, so anything goes. Also, tsuruko invited Keitaro to help motoko defeat her, so supposedly, even if both tsuruko and motoko are unconcious, it would be motoko's win. And i'm not so sure about tsuruko offering to be his wife as well. First, polygamy is illegal, and theres the fact that tension will be created between the sisters. So using your original idea won't make any sense. But offering to be his mistress? That i can see :) lol Anyways keep up the good work. I like to see where you're going with this.
one-village-idiot 2007-02-07 ch 1,	abuseBetter than previously. My problem is that Tsuroko suggesting the double marriage, is likely to anger Motoko. It may make Motoko feel inferior.
Neverwinter 2007-02-07 ch 1,	abuseI liked the original of Berserker and I am sure I will also like your rewrite of the story. I am also eagerly awaiting the story that you sampled in the original "Berserker". How long do you think it will be until you have chapter one out?

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