I'm not surprised that Meiru is surprised. I must say, you wrote this tory out wonderfully. I mean all those vivid details you've writen. This is one heck of a story ; )

UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE ... and great job on the chapter!

You updated!! A nice chapter now showing a lil more about the older enzan and the thoughts of the lil meiru.
Its very nice all the feelings you put in one chapter and the who can help meiru...

OMG *squee of delight* Just yesterday or so, I was considering checking your story for an update. I'd completely forgotten I'd tagged it so I'd be alerted at updates. Imagine my delight at checking e-mail today and finding you'd updated.

And such a teasing chapter, too. Now I just want more AND IT'S NOT HERE YET. T^T How cruel.

You must continue with this wonderfully enticing story~!

(*is also pleased at being mentioned in the notes at the beginning of the chapter*)

Ah, nice chapter! I've always loved the detail and description you give in your chapters. (And of course the flashback :P)
It's interesting to see how you portray the grown Enzan. It's not how I usually imagine him, yet it's very plausible and realistic. I'm pretty sure you will keep up the excellent quality of the story in your future chapters... therefore all I can say is... good luck!

I have never read about this pairing and your making may first time... a good one ^^
Its really nice how you add emotions and music in just a fic, the way you put their feeling its really deep and nice and its more easy to our imagination to re-create everything you write
Its really cool keep it going ^^

Bravo! Finally, a Iris x Netto fanfic! Those are hard to come by, nowadays. Keep it up!

(This is Trisscar, just in case you were wondering. :P)

Hoh man, I can't tell you how absolutely ecstatic I am to see this continued.

The character development is moving along beautifully, and the descriptions are gorgeously elegant. It sure is a wonderful feeling to be reading someone else's MeiruxEnzan stuff for a change.

It's also motivation to hone the quality of my own work, and boy do I have a long ways to go. XP

Great chapter. Excellent detail. Great story overall! The way you write these chapters is very artistic and I applaud you for that. Keep it up!

Very, very nice! A couple sentences near the beginning were a little rough to read, but other than that...this is awesome!

*Waits to see more.*

ah, Amazing story! ^_^ Just as I'd expect from an expect writer like you. I hope to see more chapters soon! X3

Very interesting. I'm glad I have finally met someone else that thinks Lan and Iris are good together! (Even if they might not be appearing.) Anyways, I hope you'll update soon!