 Leah 9/8/09 . chapter 1 what? i don't get it! |
 Black Lighted Clouds 6/4/09 . chapter 1What, is she marrying Ichigo or something? . . . That would be a good sequel, though. *hint, hint*
Very misleading title, I thought "Did Rukia die?" the second I read it. |
 Kazulallan 4/1/09 . chapter 1AH! oh no oh no oh no! please write more! (despite knowing what happens) this is too much of a cliff hanger to just LEAVE! ah! love it, but PLEASE continues! |
 mellish 4/7/08 . chapter 1Nicely written, and nicely characterized, with just the right hint of sadness. |
 Jennifer 7/17/07 . chapter 1 the dreaded clif hanger of doom! why would you do that ? Sorry it just I don't like clif hangers. Anywho that was a really good fanfic the best one I read today! bye |
 Peppermint Kiss 4/18/07 . chapter 1this is short, but it holds so much meaning! I didn't get it at first when I read it, but I read two more times and then it all clicked- it's when Byakuya and Renji have to go bring Rukia back, don't they? Anyways, I thought both Renji and Byakuya were really in character. Great job :D |
 ArtemisMS 4/9/07 . chapter 1I don't think the other reviewers are stupid... I was a little confused at the end, too. But when I read what the previous reviewer just said, I was like, "Oh!"
The story is great; I really love it! XD Just maybe add a little something... a sub-title...? to clue the (not so swift) reader in on what's going on. |
 Growing Pain 3/2/07 . chapter 1Ya got yourself some stupid reviewers who doesn't understand this is when they both get the notification they have to bring Rukia back and to execute her -.-
Anyhow, I liked it all and it was nothing out of character about it! Go you! |
 anon 2/17/07 . chapter 1 is she dead or not? what was the point of this? is this a oneshot epilogue for a story of them? |
 Kitsui 2/12/07 . chapter 1What?o-0 complete...? |
 KaRisa-Hime 2/8/07 . chapter 1this story is so great ,write more stories like this one |
 oStilloDreamingo 2/8/07 . chapter 1Blinks
That was complete? That has got to be a prologue not a oneshot.
Nevertheless, I thought it was very intriguing. I liked the ByaRen interaction in this chapter. Both felt very in character. Good job on that. |
 The CB 2/8/07 . chapter 1This is a good start, did you mean to mark it as complete and just leave it up to the reader what happened? |