Home Just In Communities Forums Beta Readers Dictionary Search Login Register Extras
Reviews For: A Star Dies

mellish
2008-04-07
ch 1,
abuseNicely written, and nicely characterized, with just the right hint of sadness.
Jennifer
2007-07-17
ch 1, anon.
abusethe dreaded clif hanger of doom! why would you do that ? Sorry it just I don't like clif hangers. Anywho that was a really good fanfic the best one I read today! bye
Peppermint Kiss
2007-04-18
ch 1,
abusethis is short, but it holds so much meaning!! I didn't get it at first when I read it, but I read two more times and then it all clicked-- it's when Byakuya and Renji have to go bring Rukia back, don't they? Anyways, I thought both Renji and Byakuya were really in character. Great job :D
ArtemisMS
2007-04-09
ch 1,
abuseI don't think the other reviewers are stupid... I was a little confused at the end, too. But when I read what the previous reviewer just said, I was like, "Oh!"

The story is great; I really love it! XD Just maybe add a little something... a sub-title...? to clue the (not so swift) reader in on what's going on.
Growing Pain
2007-03-02
ch 1,
abuseYa got yourself some stupid reviewers who doesn't understand this is when they both get the notification they have to bring Rukia back and to execute her -.-

Anyhow, I liked it all and it was nothing out of character about it! Go you!
/
2007-02-17
ch 1, anon.
abuseis she dead or not? what was the point of this? is this a oneshot epilogue for a story of them?
Kitsui
2007-02-12
ch 1,
abuseWhat?o-0 complete...?
KaRisa-Hime
2007-02-08
ch 1,
abusethis story is so great ,write more stories like this one ^^
oStilloDreamingo
2007-02-08
ch 1,
abuseBlinks
That was complete? That has got to be a prologue not a oneshot.
Nevertheless, I thought it was very intriguing. I liked the ByaRen interaction in this chapter. Both felt very in character. Good job on that.
The CB
2007-02-08
ch 1,
abuseThis is a good start, did you mean to mark it as complete and just leave it up to the reader what happened?
Return to Top