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| mellish 2008-04-07 ch 1, | abuseNicely written, and nicely characterized, with just the right hint of sadness. |
| Jennifer 2007-07-17 ch 1, anon. | abusethe dreaded clif hanger of doom! why would you do that ? Sorry it just I don't like clif hangers. Anywho that was a really good fanfic the best one I read today! bye |
| Peppermint Kiss 2007-04-18 ch 1, | abusethis is short, but it holds so much meaning!! I didn't get it at first when I read it, but I read two more times and then it all clicked-- it's when Byakuya and Renji have to go bring Rukia back, don't they? Anyways, I thought both Renji and Byakuya were really in character. Great job :D |
| ArtemisMS 2007-04-09 ch 1, | abuseI don't think the other reviewers are stupid... I was a little confused at the end, too. But when I read what the previous reviewer just said, I was like, "Oh!" The story is great; I really love it! XD Just maybe add a little something... a sub-title...? to clue the (not so swift) reader in on what's going on. |
| Growing Pain 2007-03-02 ch 1, | abuseYa got yourself some stupid reviewers who doesn't understand this is when they both get the notification they have to bring Rukia back and to execute her -.- Anyhow, I liked it all and it was nothing out of character about it! Go you! |
| / 2007-02-17 ch 1, anon. | abuseis she dead or not? what was the point of this? is this a oneshot epilogue for a story of them? |
| Kitsui 2007-02-12 ch 1, | abuseWhat?o-0 complete...? |
| KaRisa-Hime 2007-02-08 ch 1, | abusethis story is so great ,write more stories like this one ^^ |
| oStilloDreamingo 2007-02-08 ch 1, | abuseBlinks That was complete? That has got to be a prologue not a oneshot. Nevertheless, I thought it was very intriguing. I liked the ByaRen interaction in this chapter. Both felt very in character. Good job on that. |
| The CB 2007-02-08 ch 1, | abuseThis is a good start, did you mean to mark it as complete and just leave it up to the reader what happened? |