The format is weird, but aside from that it was cool. Loved the idea, being a fan of the Valenti myself.

that was really good! i wanna read max & kyle's POV's! (Please!)

Okay..normaly I don't put the answer in the review but this time I had reason ;)/supreme dramon: Thanks for your kind words no strenght to flamer ;)/ AK-77: I have printed your story (LONG! sigh) Haven't read it but will soon. Danke für den review./ HG: Also thanks to you! / Joe: Now why didn't you leave an e-mail where I can reach you ;P. Anyway. Ich wußte das ich mit ORF Österreichische Slasher finden kann ;). Es gibt sogar eine ganze Menge Slasher in Österreich. Allein in meinen Freudeskreis sind es 8 auf Wien und Linz aufgeteilt. Melde dich mal!

Hmm... interesting. I liked it, it had charm

He he. Okay, I admit, I never saw it from this angle... Cute idea. I loved the part about the Sheriff stopping Kyle's and Max' escape attempts. And the aunts were a hoot. Ha! Very nice story. ... Didn't know there were any other slash writers/readers in Austria. :) Keep writing! Best, Joe.

very,uuuummmmm... Interesting. thet is certainly not something I would ever think of on my own.

There's definitely not enough Max/Kyle-slash here. I wrote a story myself, but while I got very nice feedback from RoswellSlashArchive readers where I posted it first, there seems not to be that much interest by Roswell fans that post here (maybe you want to check it out). Now to your story: I liked it. I never thought about looking at them with the sheriff's eyes, but it's really interesting that way. I would appreciate a sequel, since your story deals with problems the boys have with living their relationship in public, and I'd like to know how they deal with that. OK, that was kinda long. Nice job.

Very good. Besides, who cares what other people think, write what makes you happy.