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Reviews For: Hope Springs Eternal

AuronLu
2007-02-20
ch 1,
abuseAww. Rin's an interesting character (especially in X... I am really not sure about the sequel) who doesn't get enough fanfic attention. You caught his voice. The haystack hair is an apt metaphor for young Rikku. I like your working backward to flesh out something that was implied in one fleeting exchange of dialogue, that Rin seems fond of Rikku and has of course known her for a long time.
Warui-Usagi
2007-02-12
ch 1,
abuseVery, very cute. :)
Pied Flycatcher
2007-02-08
ch 1,
abuseAh, tiny gap-toothed Rikku is so cute. Nicely written. :)
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