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| AuronLu 2007-02-20 ch 1, | abuseAww. Rin's an interesting character (especially in X... I am really not sure about the sequel) who doesn't get enough fanfic attention. You caught his voice. The haystack hair is an apt metaphor for young Rikku. I like your working backward to flesh out something that was implied in one fleeting exchange of dialogue, that Rin seems fond of Rikku and has of course known her for a long time. |
| Warui-Usagi 2007-02-12 ch 1, | abuseVery, very cute. :) |
| Pied Flycatcher 2007-02-08 ch 1, | abuseAh, tiny gap-toothed Rikku is so cute. Nicely written. :) |