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| loretta537 2007-09-18 ch 1,  | abusethis is good, but what happens later? humor and barbados take place in the span of less than half an hour. what happens now that hatori realizes that aya does love him? how will aya react in the following days? please write more. |
| zoebabii328 2007-03-07 ch 1, | abuseI love Yuki and Ayame being all brotherly but I would like it if Hatori had feelings for Ayame, as well so you should continue the story!! |
| Melissa 2007-02-21 ch 1, anon. | abuseMy goodness. This fic is wonderfully written. I felt so sad that I shed a couple of tears. I hope that you write something more for this "series" between Ayame and Hatori. |
| littlefiction 2007-02-14 ch 1, | abuseSo sad, and so sweet, thank goodness Yuki didn't pull away. |
| tears of emerald 2007-02-12 ch 1, | abuseOh, how utterly devastating! Truly a work of art, despite that it's too heartbreaking for words. I read the first story, and for a moment I hated Hatori. I love HatoriXAyame, though, so please do not stop writing this pairing, as I would be sad. I actually have a fic up with this pairing... But it probably isn't very good. This reminded me I was supposed to update yesterday or so. Either way, I was ripped into emotional shreds reading this. Visualization, while yet a feeling of being detached from the situation, hovering above it and just FEELING it, is absolutely lovely. You are an inspiration! A very big inspiration to all angst or romance (Or any Genre, even) writers. Honestly, I adored this, although I could have smacked Hatori upside the head. Wonderful job! Please, keep it up! |