Oh, what a lovely story!
I quite like it, you've done a good job.
You've really captured the characters, too.
Wonderful! :D

I loved this fic. I thought it was very well written, very in character (you even tried to write Rose's accent out!) and I'm so glad you had that last paragraph. Maybe it's just me being finickity, but I'm not too keen on stories that seem to make up science fiction-y things with no apparent purpose. This science fiction-y thing, however, not only had a purpose and a very Doctor-ish explanation involving coffee, but didn't exist at all! I love it.

In fact, I'm slightly scared. It's almost as though you wrote this to my own personal tastes. And for that, you are the second story on my favourites list!

Thank you for writing a wonderful piece.
TSG

Oh, I loved that! Very nice! Very sweet! And very well written with such a good idea!

I love his simple solution to a complex emotional problem and the symmetry of him thinking about her human heart at the beginning and the end.

I love the causal way he just let her sleep on him for 2 hours. No a big deal. That is so like the Doctor, no fuss no muss when it comes to the really important things.

Much enjoying this. I do hope you have a bunch more stories you haven't posted.

Oh poor Rose, sometimes for a genius he can be rather dense.

aw... what a sweet chapter!

Lovely. Really lovely.

Ooh, a very neat twist on the effects of jumping between universes. I like it.

I loved that so much! Can't wait for part 3... It's written beautifully, and very in-character. Fantastic!
Sphinxgurl

Very nice. I LOVE seeing the Doctor use his 'mind powers'...

Ooh chapter 3!! Can't wait! Great story,
Jen x

Very good. Angsty, but in a nicely understated kind of way. Looking forward to seeing how this develops.

Aww I love it! Update it soon!
Jen x

Very nice. Hope to see more caring!doctor soon...