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NarandHin-4-ever
2008-07-09 . chapter 10
RIGHT MORE! DON'T FORGET ABOUT ME!
SnowCharms
2007-11-16 . chapter 10
Poor Hinata...nut i can't believe that he actually cheated on Tenten...wif Ino no less! Din't Shikamaru or Chouji go against it or something?! Update!
shining kitsune
2007-11-13 . chapter 10
i like this story...thing. i give it...um... a 100 out of 5!!.
Stanton's Cross
2007-11-13 . chapter 10
So. Neji ignored her, cheated on her, on no evidence was so jealous that he pushed Naruto onto the street, and indeed it WAS his fault the accident happened. And she thinks it's enough to make a good start at repentance? What the hell?
SnowCharms
2007-10-29 . chapter 9
Poor Tenten...but at least she's going back 2 Neji...update!
NarandHin-4-ever
2007-04-18 . chapter 9
-has tears in eyes- -sobs- OMG!
WeaponsMistress
2007-04-18 . chapter 9
awesome! great fic i like it!
satoru-13
2007-04-17 . chapter 7
OMFG do you watch Bleach? Coz I do too. And Life Is Like A Boat pwns! Inori o sasagete atarashii hi o matsu. Asayaka ni hikaru umi sono hate made... I LOVE THE SONG! Once I listened to it on my MP3 all night and couldn't get up in the morning...=P
satoru-13
2007-04-17 . chapter 9
HOW! DARE! YOU! KILL! NEJI?!
reader
2007-04-17 . chapter 4
And now Tenten is OOC! Come on!
reader
2007-04-17 . chapter 3
What's with Neji being soo OOC?
Haruka-Hyuuga
2007-04-17 . chapter 8
Here's ur comment as promised (see my profile, A/n)

That was only...3 questions that Tenten asked Neji are u going to contnue this one-shot?

Nice work anyways but i suggest you make more descriptions.
For example how the sceens look like. You could also instead of 'Tenten said' you could have put 'Tenten asked inocently' or 'Tenten answered fuming with anger'.

Reply back. I wanna see if you like my suggestion.
xxFieryxx
2007-03-25 . chapter 8
hehe all one shot but i still love it~!
kunoichimistress
2007-03-21 . chapter 8
I LOVED IT!! Can you read and review my story:

Naruto Chikara: Generation of the Hyakuya

PLEASE, IT WOULD Be an honor, I'm sort of a fan of this story, BIG FAN!! So, PLEASE!!
Miah The Storm Wolf
2007-03-21 . chapter 8
What's "suki desu" mean?
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