 NarandHin-4-ever 2008-07-09 . chapter 10RIGHT MORE! DON'T FORGET ABOUT ME! |
 SnowCharms 2007-11-16 . chapter 10Poor Hinata...nut i can't believe that he actually cheated on Tenten...wif Ino no less! Din't Shikamaru or Chouji go against it or something?! Update! |
 shining kitsune 2007-11-13 . chapter 10i like this story...thing. i give it...um... a 100 out of 5!!. |
 Stanton's Cross 2007-11-13 . chapter 10So. Neji ignored her, cheated on her, on no evidence was so jealous that he pushed Naruto onto the street, and indeed it WAS his fault the accident happened. And she thinks it's enough to make a good start at repentance? What the hell? |
 SnowCharms 2007-10-29 . chapter 9Poor Tenten...but at least she's going back 2 Neji...update! |
 NarandHin-4-ever 2007-04-18 . chapter 9-has tears in eyes- -sobs- OMG! |
 WeaponsMistress 2007-04-18 . chapter 9awesome! great fic i like it! |
 satoru-13 2007-04-17 . chapter 7OMFG do you watch Bleach? Coz I do too. And Life Is Like A Boat pwns! Inori o sasagete atarashii hi o matsu. Asayaka ni hikaru umi sono hate made... I LOVE THE SONG! Once I listened to it on my MP3 all night and couldn't get up in the morning...=P |
 satoru-13 2007-04-17 . chapter 9HOW! DARE! YOU! KILL! NEJI?! |
 reader 2007-04-17 . chapter 4 And now Tenten is OOC! Come on! |
 reader 2007-04-17 . chapter 3 What's with Neji being soo OOC? |
 Haruka-Hyuuga 2007-04-17 . chapter 8Here's ur comment as promised (see my profile, A/n)
That was only...3 questions that Tenten asked Neji are u going to contnue this one-shot?
Nice work anyways but i suggest you make more descriptions.
For example how the sceens look like. You could also instead of 'Tenten said' you could have put 'Tenten asked inocently' or 'Tenten answered fuming with anger'.
Reply back. I wanna see if you like my suggestion. |
 xxFieryxx 2007-03-25 . chapter 8hehe all one shot but i still love it~! |
 kunoichimistress 2007-03-21 . chapter 8I LOVED IT!! Can you read and review my story:
Naruto Chikara: Generation of the Hyakuya
PLEASE, IT WOULD Be an honor, I'm sort of a fan of this story, BIG FAN!! So, PLEASE!! |
 Miah The Storm Wolf 2007-03-21 . chapter 8What's "suki desu" mean? |