aw.. don't let this story just end with that.. how about making it longer so we yuixsuboshi fans would appreciate it better

One word sums it all up: KAWAII! (cute)

AH! It lets me review! Joy and rapture! Anyways, cutie little story you got here! ^-^ Ah, a non-angsty fic between my fave FY couple! Nice nice nice! ...Write s'more! And hey, check out my Subbo/Yui fic if ya can! I'll finish it...someday... o.o; Anyways, great job! And tacky endings are good!

sniff sniff* awww..... this is sooo sweet ^ ^

Aww... kawaii! ^_^ I always felt so badly for Suboshi, having such a hard time of it. I really liked this! It was nifty to make him a painter painting his past life. I kept laughing at Miaka's matchmaking and melting at how cute Yui and Suboshi (Shunkaku, whichever) were together at the same time- an interesting sensation, I admit. ^_^ Poor Taka must get dragged into more things with Miaka around... Anyway, it's adorable, no da!

Cute story, but somehow I imagined that it would be more emotional. The story just seemed so casual, and it was a little corny, but I honestly thought that it was great start. Just be more descriptive. Like the kiss. What kind of kiss was it? How did it make them feel? What was going through their minds? It helps when you create a vivid picture for the reader. Your story also needs more emotional depth. Your portrayl of the characters seemed too undeveloped. I dont mean to give you a lecture, I'm just trying to be helpful:o) Anyways, Good luck on future stories!

Hey,

Great story...! I think that Yui and Suboshi would make a great match.

That was sweet suboshi(shunkaku,shun-chan,whatever ya wanna call him) and yui are so kawaii! together! I loved it!

So, you have written for the two lunatics, who cares about them.

Indeed, nothing wrong with shameless plugs. ^_^. *ahem* But, anyway...I enjoyed this fic a great deal...in fact, I was just thinking today that there weren't enough Yui/Suboshi fics out there, and bam! Here's one. :) Your writing style is very fluid, and it's got that simple kind of tone that makes it a heck of a lot easier to read than more convoluted writing. In other areas...Yui and Miaka are characterized VERY well in this fic, and even Taka, in his brief appearance, is right on. Suboshi doesn't seem quite like himself...but, since he's NOT really supposed to be exactly like himself, I suppose that's understandable. :):):) Ah, and the romance aspects of this are handled very well, too. Very sweeeeeet. Lovely. :) My only negative comment is this: In the scene when Suboshi saves Yui...I don't know. I really, really like the idea of him saving her, remembering, blacking out, etcetera. What I DON'T like is how quickly it's handled. It seems as if you could do SO MUCH more with that scene, make it just as spiffily-dramatic (yes, that's a word. hrmph. :P) as it could be. Anyway...gomen for the criticism. It's just that this is an excellent story, and I want to see it be the best it can be. :):) Anyway...er...I'll stop taking up all your review space now. :) Ja! ^_~.

Hate to admit it, but once in a while, there's always a sugary sweet fic that this angst-lover here falls for, and this is one of them. Kawaii! ^^