I loved it!
I will break it to you, though-after the battle with Belias, Ashe obtains the Dawn Shard, and Lord Rasler comes to her in ghost form. The only other person in the party that sees the ghost is Vaan.
Afterwards, when you leave down the steps of the Tomb of Raithwall, an imperial fleet captures you, and Vossler reveals himself as traitor while they're on the Leviathan thingy. Fran goes berserk because the imperials try to use the Dawn Shard to fuel their fleet. The Mist released from the Dawn Shard is what makes her go berserk.
Then you must fight Vossler.
Anyway, your story has to be AU. I love the idea, though!

Wow... that was the most beautiful and wonderful story I have read thus far on FF XII! You are a great writer and I would love to read any future stories you have! :) Keep up the good work!!

I've finally reviewed... yay. lol... anyways... after the battle with Belias was finished I really don't think the whole party(especially Basch) would have left them alone together. Basch is too protective of Ashe. XD anyways... good job with the story! Keep Writing!

YAY!! Bal x Ashe! Very cute!

Nice, really cute. I loved how you wrote about the fight against Belias and Bathlier collapsing (sp?) Anyway, great!

♥squee♥ I love how they kissed at the end. Basch's reply to Balthier was really funny, too. XD

Funny and oh so cute! I can see why you're proud of it. I like it a lot. Very enjoyable.

this was so sweet and romantic, yet kind of funny in some places (like balthier and basch's conversation... saucy!) :)

Ah I love it, it was funny and veery cute. I look forward to reading another one of your stories!

Wow how can you not beat Belias? He's the easiest Esper, but whatever lol.

The comment Basch made about erection was hilarious, lol.