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Reviews for: Blue on Blue
RagamuffinSundrop
2009-11-23 . chapter 1
This is my absolutely favorite one shot
B.A. Tyler
2009-01-31 . chapter 1
This is really gorgeous.
Keryl Raist
2007-10-18 . chapter 1
Hi. I absolutely love this, although there is one nit-picky bit here. Buffy's eyes are greenish-hazel. When I first read the description I was thinking this was going to be a Giles-Spike bit. Anyway, you might want to let the reader know that your Buffy has blue eyes in the description so people don't miss this because they think it's a different pairing.

Thanks for writing it.
Lupus
2007-02-22 . chapter 1
Lovely one-shot. Very evocative!
Angel of the day
2007-02-09 . chapter 1
This is really sweet! I really like it! I also like the way you write, it's very pretty for lack of a better word.
GarniGal
2007-02-08 . chapter 1
Wonderful story! I love how the colour works; the different moods, the different feelings. Beautiful.
mamajambalya
2007-02-07 . chapter 1
I haven't read any thing else you've written, so I can't comment on your "one word" idea being used by you before, other than to say I like it, and I agree with the way you've used that idea here.

I also like your use of language -- it seems almost poetic. And the small pun about the lioness/she had quickly become his pride was subtle yet intelligent -- just the way I like my romance. This is good. I'd sign in to review you, but that would require me becoming a member, so I hope you don't mind this is unsigned.
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