 mamajambalya 2007-02-07 . chapter 1 Sweet! I really liked this, because it took me back to the old(er) Wesley -- not the irritating dweeb from Buffy, but the often-heroic counterpoint to Angel's brooding angst. Of course, later seasons would change this Wesley, but what you've got here captures him then -- pre-Conner, pre-throat-being-cut...it's very lovely.
Again, I have to remark on your lovely way with words. I liked your Fred's rambling thoughts. I especially loved this:
"Or…should I say, I noticed him, in the vague way that I noticed the light bulb in the lamp on the left side of my bed was burnt out, or the way I noticed the picture of sunset hanging above the bed in the room Angel gave me."
Hope you write more Wesley/Fred, to go with the Giles/Buffy MORE you're going to write, right? |