Oh.

OH.

...♥

There is so many things that I would like to say. How well this was written ('tis beautiful); the characterization (SPOT ON). How unbelievable the whole thing is, with every element, is what I'll stick to for now.

Because, right now, words just fail me. Not only is this a superb study on Roxas and Sora, it's a great study on their dynamic. And, really, it's quite wonderfully explored.

Especially the emphasis that they aren't the same person. A-and that's just too true. They might be similar, but they're not the same. A-and you nail that through head quite clearly.

Oh, boy, I am fangirling too hard on this to say something helpful and/or constructive. B-but I guess this will just have to do.

This was lovely. Beautiful, dark, and just something in it's own right. *LOVES*

- Pixie

wow... I loved your style... it made the whole thing seemed so angsty, and dark, and you could really just feel the hopelessness (is that a word?) of the characters... It was purely brilliant, and now a favorite.

~x.o.x.o.

I don't find myself appriciating very many things, but this is one of them.

I adore this so much. ♥

& it's for me? HOMYJEBUS.

It's like reading some very metaphorical, twisted, deep and meaningful poetry that isn't so much deep as just absolutely brilliant and impossible to describe.

I adore it and I love you and I love this and now I want to write RoxasSora because I've already written KairiNaminé but that fic fails so much in comparison to yours. ♥

adoreadoreadore × infinityinfinityinfinity

I Love You. *huggle*

*FAVE'D*

@_@;

*Dazzled*

Oh, my gosh. That made my head spin in the most awesome way, if that makes any sense. X3; Really. Your metaphors and your ending and your beginning (Shit, even the middle~) and... the overall j.blueness. It's all for the win. :3

Hahah. I don't think anyone can pull off this twisted relationship quite like you, woman. :3

♥

o.O wow. that was amazing

whoa... nice story, it's just like a poem (almost like a drabble, except this makes more and more sense)!

Oh, wow, this is amazing. Did you make all this stuff up? Because I've (we've) been in the place where we have to work out afterwards which thoughts and which actions were whose. And the style and voice are just perfect, jarring discontinuities everywhere. Great job!

Wow. That was absolutly beautiful! Honestly, it was like reading poetry. The way it was written was almost as if you were whatching them and yet were inside their heads at the same time. You could feel what each of them felt, but then you felt all of them at the same time. Ack, did that even make sense? Ha ha.
Regardless, this story captured some of my feelings about the nobodies and their fate inside someone else. I think this story is brilliant. I also liked the confusion with their names. Nobody knew who was right and it kept bouncing around from person to nobody.
My favorite lines were: "There were colorful dreams of beaches and heartless and vivacity and adventure and laughing and red hair—beautiful, childish, naïve.

There were grayscale dreams of people who weren’t people and light and adventure and smirking and red hair—poetry, pure, twisted."
Also your playing with the color blue and things being "too blue". I love it all.
It actually makes me feel inspired to do something after I read it. Bravo!