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| Ducky'sgirl4ever 2008-07-04 ch 1,  | abuseA great story. I liked the part where Gil met Hodges at the diner. |
| ayesha-s 2008-03-25 ch 1, | abuseoh wow funny! love it! |
| Skoteinos Metamfiezomai 2008-01-23 ch 1, | abuseWould never happen indeed. *snicker* Hilarious, still, though. ~IGC t DM |
| madpsychogirl 2007-10-12 ch 1, | abuse"A what!?!?!" Lol can totally picture his face!! Well written, love it! |
| Number1GSRCSIfan 2007-10-01 ch 1, | abuseAhh that last line was BRILLANT |
| KneeDeepinInk 2007-07-18 ch 1, | abuseVery cute; I giggled at the end. Good writing and nice flow Dy |
| ajechi 2007-06-07 ch 1, | abuseCOOL! |
| sheeny1010 2007-03-29 ch 1, | abuseExcellent job and extremely funny. I can so see this happening. Sheeny |
| marisol brennan 2007-02-23 ch 1, | abuseThis is a fabulous story, in fact I love all your stories they are so intriguing and heartfelt. Oh, and the ending of this one made me laugh. |
| JackofSpade 2007-02-14 ch 1, | abuseFavorite Line: Grissom pursed his lips as he twirled the fork in his hand. “My girlfriend’s a vegetarian. Which pretty much makes me a vegetarian.” What a wonderful treat! When I read this line, I actually giggled out loud...which brought some interesting glances from my co-workers. Thanks |
| Maisy13 2007-02-12 ch 1, | abuseGoodness, I really enjoyed this story. You had Hodges to a T. Grissom a little OC, but that's okay sometimes. I don't know why I haven't read anything from you before, but I'm going to check out the rest of your stories. |
| nzdeb 2007-02-12 ch 1, anon. | abusehi , that made me laugh but he did deserve it , this was good thanks a lot . |
| HoldoutTrout 2007-02-10 ch 1, | abuseI *wish.* This was so, so cute. I could just see Grissom finally wanting to get the absolute last word with Hodges. "Because we'd be one person short." And then asking Sara which she'd prefer...and then her revenge. Perfect. |
| Kristafied 2007-02-10 ch 1, | abuseHa! Loved it, laughed out loud! |
| spongebob 2007-02-09 ch 1, anon. | abuseLovely as usual. I would have loved to see Grissom's expression in the final few lines. I thought you wrote Hodges very well, with his air of self absorbance and supremacy. So was Sara kidding with Grissom with the pregnancy thing? |