 fleeting.ideas 3/16/07 . chapter 8... uh huh :]
I liked it though
I did.
Just don't get it.
But well written :] |
 longblacksatinlace 3/14/07 . chapter 8I really enjoyed these! Normally I don't like the little ficlets or drabbles, cause they aren't structured enough to keep me interested. But this is so very well written. I like how each one focuses on someone different! |
 Meta Capricorn 2/24/07 . chapter 7I like the concept of describing the wizarding world through the eyes of a foreigner. That this foreigner is Dudley, ignorant son of ignorant parents, makes it quite interesting and the glimpses he doesn't catch but which you described make this narrow room with dusty toys sparkling and the photo makes it warm.
And then I can't help but feel sorry for Dudley, who might have become a different person if not born to people like that.
I love your stories!
Meta |
 Meta Capricorn 2/22/07 . chapter 6Aw, his chess set! How cute, this is a very nicely written scene.
The one before: I usually am no fan of H/R, but this one was very good. You always make me feel warm inside with your writings, and today I really needed that.
Thank you very, very much!
Meta |
 roguepixie04 2/21/07 . chapter 6i really like this . lots of different puzzle pieces..will they fit together? please update soon |
 Meta Capricorn 2/16/07 . chapter 4It's an interesting idea to describe death not as the omnipresent floating over the own body but as sinking into the earth.
The first sentence one could argue about (which I won't do, now), but it seems quite logical, referring to the fact you appreciate something the most when you loose it.
The last paragraph was wonderful.
Yours,
Meta |
 Meta Capricorn 2/9/07 . chapter 2Wow, that was very good! I love how you describe their relationshipe like a symbiosis, which just fits with their pact making. And of course, memory doesn't care, it just preserves the really important things of/for us, and in her case it is being together.
Yours,
Meta |
 SuGaRLiLy 2/8/07 . chapter 2short and sweet- nice job |
 ttfn.tahtahfornow 2/8/07 . chapter 2Wow.
Sad, sweet, very very good.
I love it!
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 ttfn.tahtahfornow 2/8/07 . chapter 1Aw.
Absolutely adorable.
Short, sweet, lovely.
Good job!
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 x-FuzzleMONSTER 2/8/07 . chapter 1wonderful. |