Hi...I can only say two words...

Sweet...Cute...

Take care...

Read it. Liked the flow. More of a Warhammer 40k type of guy.

Actually I do have such a screen capture if you want it?.

Such a short story was expecting a few more chapter lie this one from the other M&T stories you have posted. It's rather sweet thought regardless.

Good work ^^

So cute! I just love this whole series!

really beautifull ! those two just get along together !

I loves it! sorry I'm hyper... fluff tends to do that to me especially Abel/Esther fluff. This was just so cute! Keep up the good work.

And thus, it came to pass that the reader was infected by the AbelxEsther fluff virus and promptly melted into a pile of mushy goo upon reading what was, undoubtedly, one of the best AbelxEsther fics out there.

Narratives aside, this is really an extremely good fic. It's wittily narrated (I was chuckling from line one), beautifully described, characterization is spot-on - and did I mention that I adore the interaction between Abel and Esther? Simply beautiful. =D

As a side note, this fic goes very well with the Broken Wings Piano version.

Of course, there were a couple errors with punctuation and the like, but nothing that detracted seriously from the actual story, and hey, nobody's perfect.

My only serious complaint? This is addictive; at the end I was left with a craving sensation and a small voice in my head screaming 'More! More!' Okay, so that wasn't really a serious complaint, but I'm a little short on those as it happens. =P

So, um, I'm off to read all the other installments in the series. Ta!

your a very talented writer, I can't wait till I finish reading all of your storys!There just so good!

~crusnik~

"...falling into fountains at the most inopportune moments, whenever he’d caught young Ion Fortuna, the Count of Memphis, making calf’s eyes at his Esther."

You know, I was wondering about that. When I saw that particular scene in the anime, those were my ideas percisely. XD

Awesome job. VERY, imensely cute. I loved it.

Aw, and this one is just as sweet as the other story, too. Lovely.

Hello again!

Ah so now I know what you meant by the Milk Tea series. I was curious and now I know, and hey I have missed a lot! Shoot, I got a lot of catching up to do! YES you did continue after All I Wish Is To Dream Again!

I have heard of the Blanket challenge too, but on another site, however, I think it's down now since I can't find it anymore. Right, no more dilly-dallying and on to your review.

The beginning to this amazing one shot already had me in stitches, from the first sentence. You are great at writing humor, I take my hat off to you, and this coming from the person who wrote the Red Rose Comedy. I must commend you on using the good Professor Wordsworth, the poor guy isn't even used much in the series. I quiet like his character too. But the idea that he wanted to use Able in an experiment and Able running out of his office was too good of an idea, that mental picture was one worth to be animated and shown on TV!

I must say I love Able’s line of thoughts here, they are very funny to read. Especially when he catches himself thinking too much about Esther. I absolutely adore the part where Esther misinterpreted Able's shiver and then she scooted over, tried to cover him with the blanket and failing then sitting herself on his lap. Your description of Able's glasses fogging over was priceless.

Ahh... then they kissed... what a romantic scene. And he shifted partially into his Crusnik form and oh I thought that scene looked a lot like the end credits before you told the reader so in your end notes. And yeah, even I'm looking for a clear shot of that screen cap, but I'm still turning up empty. That is a very lovely picture.

I am beginning to develop an addiction to your style of writing, Darth Stitch. And now, I shall go on to the next stage of the Milk Tea series. Beautiful Disaster.

Thank you for sharing your marvelous ideas with the rest of the world.

Yours sincerely and till the next time

Advi

PS: Thank you for your review reply.

I've always loved that scene in the closing credits too. It's so protective and romantic in pose, and you've captured that scene very well, especially the gentle teasing between Abel and Esther. I happen to think Abel is beautiful in Crusnik form, and I'm glad to find that someone else does too.

God, I just loved that...especially when Abel shifts into his Crusnik form... it's just so sweet! And yes! I love the sceencap at the ending of "Broken Wings"! It's just too...sweet...

omfg!
that was so cute!

Aww! *melts* Hehe, I have to admit...I love Abel/Esther a whole, whole lot. This story was amazing! I found no typos at all, and the way you told the story was very IC for Abel's perspective. I love when you wrote 'Abel meeped' ... that has got to be the funniest thing ever! It's just so cute.

Your style is excellent, smooth, easy to read, and overall just extremely fun!

Nothing like potential hypothermia to bring those two together! LOL, body heat is such a fun excuse. Anyway, this made the fangirl in me do backflips of joy. Keep up the amazing work!

Oh, I love that part in the end credits! I wish I had a screenshot of it, too. I'll be looking around. ^^

-Alaena