I loved it! Great story. You did a great job with the characters and OCs. My favorite chapters were 2 and 3. I swear I couldn't stop laughing! HAHA!

A delightful read. I've read several takes on what the slayer's children would be like and this scenario seems plausible, if not preferable. I hope there is more to come.

Oh, wow, this fic is SO adorable! XD It's inspiring many fanart ideas. :D

Cute chapter! Continue soon. Thanks for updating!


PD: Hey, I want more abour Lina's family! ^_^

lol, just finished reading all of them. Chapters 6 and 11 were my favorites. Just hilarious! Though I was so sure that it was Xellos himself who was scaring the kids. Oh, well.

I don't remember seeing any grammer or spelling mistakes, the plot flows well for them all, and each one gets a 10/10 from me. Please keep up the good work, and write more soon! =D

P.S. Please have another guest star some time soon. Those are always great. Maybe Filia and Val? hehe Just imagine the chaos! Especially if Jilas demonstrated to Rowan how his bombs work. *evil laughter* Just a suggestion. You can totally disregard if you wish.

P.P.S. Why doesn't Zack like being compared to an elf? Elves are awesome! I think it would be cool to have naturally pointy, elven ears, but that's just me. Well, that's my random thought for the day.

Again, please write more soon. =D

Seeing Zel twitch liek that is so much fun!

I highly approve of this.

Very cute story!

Sarah

Cute. I can just imagine a boy and his dog-bear-dragon playing catch in a castle.
'Nama' I really need to catch up on Slayers...

The leash harness joke was funny, but the last time seemed a little...forced.
You might want to look the chapter over for some grammer mistakes. Nothing big though

Cute. I don't see why Zack minds being called an elf, unless there's something connected to elves I'm unaware of.

Loved this story. I can't wait to read more.

Ah, that was cute. ^_^ Zelgadis, you old softie... heh. Zack and Nama for the win.

Thanks for updating this recently. I don't think I reviewed for all the chapters, but seeing this in my favorites list as being updated always seems to get a smile on my face and spurs me into reading Slayers again. I haven't touched this fandom in a long time and I bet there are a lot of fictions I need to catch up with. =_=

Revenge is sweet! ;P

Aw how cute a puppy!! I love puppies!! Hehehe keep the good work! ^_^ Continue soon