interesting story, takes a cool concept and expands well on it...


but im a bit confused...wtf happened to the three men who confronted Rukia and Ichigo when she was in her underwear before the kiss? they just disappeare, then toushirou comes in...can you explain what happened?

either way, hope you update soon.

I like this story so far. The cliffhangers are interesting. I hope you return to Normality soon because I also enjoy that story.

Oh this is a wonderful IchiRuki story, the best Pirates AU I've read with the perfect IchiRuki-ness!
I can't wait until the next chapter when you write it! You're English is very nice, but I'm not sure if it's my own reading or not, but sometimes it can get a little hard to follow.

Oh my. That last line sealed the deal for me. I'm officially excited for the next chapter! Let me guess...Rukia can see it, but he can't? Heh heh. I like the idea of your story, mixing pirates, Bleach, and magic in an almost Final Fantasy kinda way. B/c even though they use ships to get around, people can use magic and there's modern things, like couches and billards. I like it. I would like to point out 1 thing though. When the three men come to Ichigo/Rukia's room, what happens when Ichigo starts kissing her? B/c the way it is now:

Three men show up-->Ichigo kisses "Rue"-->Toushiro shows up

So do they kiss while the three men are still standing there? Where do the three men go? I was confused at that. Anyway, keep up the good work, update soon please!

Its great I like it I am a new reader and the story is great keep up the good work the way some of the words are put together seems odd like you speak a different language than english cause that's how they would put their words together but who cares I understood and the story is great. Please update soon.

Thank you so much for the update. I hope you will keep them coming. I really liked how you furthered Ichigo & Rukia's relationship in this chapter. The onlookers were a great device to force the kiss without it seeming rushed. Great job!

Hmm...More Updates. NAO. Aahh Syn, another perfect series you have written. I shall forgive you somewhat for your evilness, but know I still pout. True evilness has never been seen with how much you teased us with the IchiRukiness in this chapter. I want MOAR. Lovely update and I shall now bug you for the next chapter! mufufuf! Interesting developments, and Ichigo has a butterfly too! The plot thickens! I really enjoyed every bit of it, and this chapter was perfect as all the rest. Keep up zee awesome work, love!

("There was no way such a kiss was a fake", huhuhu.)

Qu'est-ce que je peux faire d'autre que couiner, là ? xD
Merci, merci, merci!

(J'aime toujours autrant laisser des reviews en fraçais xD)

syn girl this story is awsome its me anya7890 from ba yeah this story is FREAKING AWSOME i love how you name ships after zanpaktou awsome idea i just love it kepp up the good work

Great story! lots of mystery in the plot.
is IchiRuki the only pairing?

Great story overall. ;D
I started from the beginning, and it's good so far.
I like the part where Ichigo and Rukia kissed. It's wonderfully described lol. xD

Good job!:)I wanna read more...:D

Nice story! I'm loving the ichiruki and non POTC pirateness!
Way better than POTC btw ^_^ update soon!

Wow this is really an amazing story! I love the fact that there is just the right amount of action and ichirukiness it's so balanced I can't wait for the next charter.
What's with the butterfly tattos they sound so cool! Can only rukia see ichigo's or can he see it to!? Can every one use magic and spells or only some of the bleach characters?
Well i'll just stop my dumb rambling and silently pray for the next chap ^.^

I can't remember my login. -_-; but what a lovely last paragraph. This is pretty adorable: "It should be like this, yet… it shouldn’t!"