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River City1
2007-05-25 . chapter 1
Excellent!
Becomingwhaturmeantobe
2007-05-20 . chapter 1
I loved that, as usual with your fics. Great job, I love the bonding .
Kristi
2007-03-30 . chapter 1
good story but I have to ask: I know bobby is a character on the show but are Jim, Mac, and Caleb?

Sorry to ask but I missed a lot of the show :(
SomeoneElsesDream
2007-02-10 . chapter 1
"You're not always going to be there to save the day. It's okay."

No. No it is not okay. Caleb must always be there to save the day as it makes me feel warm and fuzzy inside.

So you have more one shots that you haven't posted?? I demand that you post them...because I have that authority.
irismay42
2007-02-10 . chapter 1
*snigger* Caleb listening to Enya... Heh heh heh... As usual, it's up to Dean to take care of everyone - I loved him bringing donuts for Sam (aw...) and not wanting to leave him on his own with John for too long!

Your dialogue's great by the way - nicely snarky in all the right places!
adder574
2007-02-09 . chapter 1
Great job. I love Brotherhood stories.
KatieLB
2007-02-08 . chapter 1
between you, Ridley and Will spoiling us .. I really don't have to read too many more fics... you guys have us entertained for the long haul and I thank you from the bottom of my supernatural obsessed heart! good job...bless that caleb
WindStar
2007-02-08 . chapter 1
awesome story, i suppose we'll be hearing more about this silas character in ridley's fic?

thanks for posting ^^
LovinJackson
2007-02-08 . chapter 1
I get so excited when i see brotherhood stories being posted :D
Poor Caleb and i loved JOhn's pep talk lmao Oh and the Enya in his jeep. I like the way you and Ridley can both right these fics and not get confused with storylines and stuff. They all fit so well together :-)

Keep up the great work :-)

I am so scarily addicted to the brotherhood lol :-)

Tara :-)
TraSan
2007-02-08 . chapter 1
Nice - and I already see a possibly tie in with Ridley's new story.

Slickeroo.

Good story.
bally2cute
2007-02-08 . chapter 1
The more stories of the Brotherhood that you all write, the more similarities I see between Caleb and the brothers Winchester. I've gotten used to the way this bunch of lovely misfits deal with stuff, but I can still hope for actual hugs can't I? I wonder if these three could be even stronger and better together than the original Knight, Guardian, and Scholar? I guess I'll have to leave that until I know more about the original three and the beginning of it all. That would be something interesting. I really love reading stories in this universe. You're an excellent writer, and I can't wait for more of your great work!
Nana56
2007-02-08 . chapter 1
Good! A little more insight into Caleb and I love to see him interact with our boys!
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2007-02-08 . chapter 1
Enya! xDD
H.T.Marie
2007-02-08 . chapter 1
Well hell, I'm sure Caleb listens to Enya while he's in teh bathtub with lit candles all around. I know I do. LOL.

Poor Dean has to be big brother to everyone these days, eh? Damned drunks. J/K. I kinda envy the dudes, though. How the hell do they get off reading Tom Clancy and I can't even finish a friggin' fanfic? Perhaps I should go into demon hunting. Screw normal.

HT
Laura
2007-02-08 . chapter 1
man i got to get me a log on so i can leave official reviews.

okay about the story. i liked it but it was very Caleb centric, like he's getting his own fandom or something. Don't get me wrong, I like Caleb but I LOVE Dean and Sam, and not as guest stars.

Not enough Caleb and Sam interaction though. That is my only real grip. Caleb gets Dean time, all the time, and he gets John time (and boy I miss John) but never any real Caleb Sam time, not in your stories or Ridelys. Unless it is to chew Sam out. That is sad, don't you guys like Sam too?

But nice story. I like that Caleb doesn't like any one else gettin hurt to help him but he needs help as in recent stories he doesn't do very well by himself.

Laura Billings
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