I totally agree with you, I like this ending better. Please write more though even if its just another chapter.

Macy

keep going!111

I liked how Julian got them to leave but I think at the end Jenny should've fought back a bit.

U.R.NOT.STOPING.THIS.STORY! ITS TO AMAZING GOD PLEASE GO ON! PLEASE PLEASE!

Add more! LOL. I'm liking it so far-you should write about what happens afterward:D

i like this ending. xD

Awesomely amazing. Ah, I do love Julian :)

Cool. I really wish you would make this a series, maybe starting a little while after this. Anyway good job, this is awesome.

really thats it, continue please:)

Great story. But horribly optimistic.

This story is very cool and I would love to read the next chapter! Please writhe more!

OHHHHH MAAAAN!

So I just finished the book (with all three books combined) and was SO UPSET WITH THE ENDING. My first thought was to come here, fingers crossed, hoping that there would be a section here- and low and behold, FF.net answered my prayers!

I'm am SO glad to see that there are other people who have more love for Julian than Tom. I thought that it would have been MUCH more interesting if she went with him- and really, Julian's a babe while Tom's kind of a butthole. Then again, teenage heart-throb books can't have 'good people' siding with 'bad people.' That's waaaay too out of the box.

Sorry about the ramble - thank you for this! I'm so happy right now:D:D:D:D:D:D:D!

Tekko

Awww ! U made Julian seem sooo much nicer 2 Jenny lol u shld rlly continue this !

This is awesome! Yeah I was surprised when Jenny managed to trick Julian when he could read her mind and due to the fact he was an experienced shadow man of how many years. This is much more realistic and it would be awesome to read more.

wow... its been years since i read this series...

i always had a soft spot for julian though. i really like how you've kept his character - a little mean, but not evil. it would be great if you could do some kind of sequel, like a oneshot of their life together later...