 ignis'caereleus 2009-05-12 . chapter 1XD You are a bad person, I was laughing so much that i got a headache, the "anatomically correct little chocolate Nejis (vanilla cream filled). " LOVED IT. More obsesive Neji please. |
 kyoushu the deadly 2008-06-09 . chapter 1DUDE WTF WAS THT ** DUDE I WAS LAUGHING MY ** OFF HAHA BLUE MUSHROOM THIS HAS 2B THE WIERDEST STORY I"V EVER READ WTF HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAAH lol |
 Tarff 2008-02-23 . chapter 1 HAHAHAHAHA! Gotta be the best Valentine's Naruto character fanfic EVER! HAHAHAHA! That was so funny! And so ridiculously... well, ridiculous. I just LOVED it! HAHAHAHA! |
 Flammendo 2008-02-16 . chapter 1*FLAMES*
No, it was trashy indeed... a don't get me wrong ;D I love trashy fanfics...
I've written myself one too, about Jiraya, Tsunade, Orochimaru and Kabuto playing golf. (All just because Kabuto wanted to be a real medic and real medics play golf... he knew of medic-series in TV)
Sidestory was, that Tsunades mislead golfball destroyed the death-star because it hit the spot, Luke was supposed to hit, rammed the spaceship enterprise and killed a neopet.
Okey, I know who Gargamel was... but I don't know who the OC was... someone known?
Oh and BAD Neji... I wonder IF he will try that thing with Hinata out or if he will back down. ^^ I expect the last one to happen ;D
really nice ficcie :D
Byebye
Flammendo |
 thursdayMD 2007-03-21 . chapter 1lol, i love the exaggerations. like... wow, just one sentence into neji's introduction, and "stoic neji" is already "lovingly whisper[ing]" to hinata. and oh my, you make neji's over obsessiveness so creepy! hinata-sama this, hinata-sama that. it's always hinata hinata hinata with him. but of course no one would ever know it from neji's dignified... self-controlled... outer appearance/approach about it. well, i rather have extreme love than extreme hatred =] and at first i thought the blue mushroom was a metaphor for something but then i remembered, "parody," so yeah. anyways, yes, very bad ooc fic, but still fun enough that it was read-tolerable. i'll give you kudos for that! |
 withallduerespect 2007-03-03 . chapter 1 this was actually kinda funny :-) |
 sseleman 2007-02-27 . chapter 1"Neji said, hoping to calm Hinata's twitching, even though she looked so cute when she twitched. It almost made a certain part of him twitch." hahahahahaha, perv ;x
this story was great! i dunno whatcha mean by it being bad and all but waha it was just so awesome XDD
keep it up :) |
 thefullygirlalchemist 2007-02-16 . chapter 1o...k... that was strange but i dont flame you because it was my fault to read it so whateva it was a little um... cool... and why did you made it a m ranked fic humm? 7.7 |
 Noble Fool 2007-02-08 . chapter 1Hahahhaa. Ah...Neji Neji Neji. I hope he gets his wish on having his Hinata-sama eat chocolate paint off of him. Hehehehe.
And honestly, you should read my REALLY bad OOC stuff when I get in my moods. Oh the horror! Lol. But I liked this! It's fun to read these things, believe it or not. Just as long as people don't take it too seriously of course. =D
Hm...the Sasuke one would be pretty interesting to see! I wonder if he'd start hitting on his fangirls and go for them? Oh WOAH! Lol lol.
Nice job! |
 Lady Of Genesis 2007-02-08 . chapter 1Can anyone say what the crap? XD
Very... peculiar. But the ending makes sense. You should make a sequel D: Y'know, with Sasuke. |