this is a great story please update soon

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an unusual start, a walk through the ages, I look forward to seeing how Prim and Harry get along

I love how you interweave so many different historical things into this story. It adds a sort of depth/flavor that most stories lack. Please update soon!

I still don't see any bashing of Harry in this story. And the drawing he did of Privet Drive in rumbles... Your Harry is a bit of a seer?

I just checked your profile and I hope things are getting better for you now and that the muses come back to inspire you to continue this story.

Harry's bashing? Where? What I missed here? I didn't see/read anything that I would consider bashing of Harry's character.

I think this was quite an original and interesting begining. You made the story of Pim/Pime worth of following and I caught myself wishing for even more details of his life. This prologue remind me a bit of the first book of the trilogy "The Forever King", a great fantasy story. It was truly a great begining and I'm having great expectations for the rest of the story.

You did the one thing I hoped you wouldn't do - you put Harry in Gryffindor. Honestly, the whole sorting part of this chapter became absolutely unnecessary the moment the hat said G. Why go through all that, just to follow canon? The ruminations that the hat has would have been interesting if they had been logical; as it is, they were incredibly faulty. Sorting Harry into Slytherin would have made much more sense at this point; to change the image of S; to try and influence the way the Slyths view the world, as well as the other way around, etc, etc.

The Draco bit was also completely illogical - he is an obnoxious little twit no doubt but an obnoxious little twit who comes from a type of family that would prevent what you had written. Ron too, definitely OC.

I liked the story so far, but am seriously contemplating whether it is worth my time. You are sticking to the books too closely. Oh you change this and that, but in relevant points you have changed nothing and that is simply put boring. I'll give it a go for another chapter or so, but if you do end up sticking to the canon so much...

Awesome story. I can't wait until the next chapter.

Please continue your story because it's really interesting and I want to find out what happens to Pim and the Stone and Quirrel and everything really. So please continue so your conscious is set at rest by not continuing such a fantastic story, but everyone else who read this story with 562 reviews, including mine, so please to put everyone at ease; PLEASE CONTINUE THE STORY.

-Michael

P.S. My email is BYoshi1993(at)Aim(dot)com.

Loving it so far. Keep up the good work. Are you going to ever involve dementors? Or sphinxes?

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Hum. That poor woman and girl. If you decide to do away with the woman, and then the man (rightfully so!), maybe the daughter gets so upset at losing her mother and then her father (though through totally different ways, he turned evil while she died) that she tries to commit suicide. I know that |I| would. Maybe Harry sees how upset she is and asks Pim to bring her back to the Tower of Pime to live there as a sort of adoptive. A great story, though. And please don't forget to bring these characters back...

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Hey, man! ;D Anyway, I like this story, but you should know that if you don't think of some way to give that psychotic killer some form of severe punishment, then there's probably going to be an angry mob out screaming for your blood. I can personally think of maybe a million things, off the top of my head: Make him suffer the Dementor's Kiss, blow him up from the inside, cut off a limb, have wizards punish him... oh the possibilities are endless. And ignore Eternal Hawk, but be careful cuz I know she has friends and will probably try her hardest to do what she says... (rolls eyes) Trust me, she's resourceful and she knows her stuff... (rolls eyes again)

Oh, I hope you have that little girl cut her father up into little pieces and burn those little pieces into ashes, then scatter those ashes to the wind. I hope you don't make it so that psycho feels guilty and doesn't get his. And I swear to God, so help me if you kill off that mother I don't care who hates me, I'm reporting you.

Read all of it. It's good, but when you are going to get back to work on it? And was the mother killed by that God-awful "father"? You COULD say she was taken to St. Mungo's because of the trauma, but I would actually prefer it that she was NOT killed; if that sorry excuse for a human being actually killed his own wife, there can be no coming back from such an act and deserves whatever retribution he gets. Secondly, please, please, PLEASE pair Harry up with Hermione; Ginny only sort of "hero-worshipped" him in the books and also never really fought for him that the way Hermione did. I swear to God, if, even in this parallel reality they end up together, I'm going to scream. But, hey, good job so far, just don't keep us all in suspense...