and what happens? Please tell my you wrote more because that is like a really bad cliffy. He didn’t die did he? Because that would just suck.

Ack! Too short! Can't tell exactly was supposed to have happened!
-glower-

Well-written, and I do get a sense of desperation and so on from the fic, but it's a bit like letting a PMSing woman lick a chocolate bar, and then taking it away from her and locking it up in Gringott's.

AKA, not fair. -pout-

loved it!

Gah, I hate it when the writing is obscure enough that we can't know for sure what happens next. So, is he dead then? He is, isn't he? :(

Wow, I don't know how, but with such a short story as this you yet had me in a grip. It was moving *nodnod* A sure fav ^^

First of all, this does NOT need to be rated M. Maybe T or even Kplus. Second of all, I loved the idea. It was really cute. However, I do think it needed more detail. Short fics are fine with me, especially with one shots, but short fics that seem to drabble on in short, choppy sentences with no real emotion described I have a problem with. However, I really did enjoy it overall.

aww so sad i love it ^^

Love the fic. !! ^^

Umm. Good but the rating isn't right. It should be a 'T' at the most. But it's very well writen.

Short, sweet, and sad.

(wipes eyes)

short unexpected interesting... fits your penname nicely- abstract concept

Aw! that was so...sweet! and the summary is what drew e in. I love it. -favourites-
loves!
-Kozi