I loved it, very realistic and exactly the way I would see Balthier and Ashe together. Usually I don't like songfics, but you did a very good job of adding the lyrics in right at the appropriate time. Very awesome, keep it up. XD

-DarkShine07

ah i love jewel, but i never liked that song. I think I'll enjoy it much more from now on. :-D You're right... it did fit perfectly. This was so cute, I loved it!

eh that song sounds kinda boring i think...but yeah i like this pairing even though i don't really know anything about it, and like yeah i'm not usually into serious angsty fluff like this but whatever. it was pretty good!