Reviews for Black and Blue in Space

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Silver-Eyed-Elf 2007-08-15 ch 57,	abuseWhat a great story. You seemed to tell it more like an epic poem rather than a story. I'd love to read some of your poetry if you write any. Marvellous way to end it by the way, it leaves the romantic in me satfied and still seems realistic.
Aeris888 2007-07-01 ch 57,	abuseThis pleasantly surprised me, to the point that I couldn't stop eating and swallowing the words; it was that emotionally-involving. There were parts where I think you were going too off-tangent, parts where the angst was oozing (not a good thing), but they were far too few compared to the moments that honestly touched my heart. I love this, truly, not only because I eat up any Albel/Maria fics to be found (they are rare, sadly), but because you have a way in evoking tangible human emotions believably well. I'd just like to point out that this lovely piece doesn't go unnoticed and that I would love to read more from you. Keep it up ^_^
foxygirlchan 2007-06-15 ch 56,	abuseOH MY GOD FANFICTION ATE MY COMMENT AGAIN -headdesks- Just know that my last comment to this was full of praise and awesomeness to this fantasorgasmitastic story, but fanfiction ate it! D:
foxygirlchan 2007-05-29 ch 57,	abuseDomg! Over already?! D: .>; [But not, because your story is WAY better than "cry me a river!". D: I'm so sad that it's over though! I enjoyed reading this so much!
Cauryn Terenkey 2007-05-29 ch 57,	abusecute!! ^^ i liked it.^^
Cauryn Terenkey 2007-05-29 ch 9,	abusecool. i'll keep reading^^ toodles
Landarr 2007-05-21 ch 55,	abuseWonderful. I', waiting for whatever's next... impatiently. But you ARE good! Landarr Waiting.
foxygirlchan 2007-05-15 ch 55,	abuseMuch love! I guess this story is inspiration to help me write demented stories. It's not an insult, by the way. :0 [I also watched "The Good Son" so that might add to the crazy thoughts in my head. It's what I'm trying to do anyways...] Even more love to this story!
foxygirlchan 2007-04-24 ch 40,	abuseThis story is extreme love. I hope this isn't finished, I can't wait for more. This story keeps me thinking. I'm feeling strange, and that's something completely different, but this story doesn't really help and doesn't really make it worse. I guess it keeps the feeling. I don't know if it's good or not. Your writing is so strange too. It's good, keeps me reading, but it makes me start thinking too much. Great story! Albel and Maria are going insane. They might as well be going insane together. Keep on writing! And doing what you do best! Adios!
Dragon Chyld 2007-04-23 ch 38,	abuseWell, I must admit that this is one couple I could never see or write about, but you have done an excellent job. I was only going to skim through this to see if it fit in the Maria/Albel section of the forum…but then I found myself reading it. So much emotion and a few places that made me chuckle. I really feel for the two of them. Despite this being one couple I never cared for, I will read more. The short chapters are just captivating, leaving enough detail to get the emotions through but enough ‘empty space’ to keep the mystery and feel. I may not convert, but I can appreciate your style! :)
xOxAzureFlameGodxOx 2007-04-20 ch 37,	abuseThis is quite good, despite the short length of the chapters. It's in a unique form, which makes it so much better, too! Update soon! :)
Anarchy Sky 2007-04-19 ch 36,	abuseOh my, perviness indeed! =) I have yet to mention how much I enjoy this story. I love your style. Very unusual presentation but it's great. Actually, the way you write seems to fit Albel and Maria better. Your story has revived my support for AlbelMaria. This story is quite impressive. I look forward to more!
NextHeaven 2007-04-18 ch 35,	abuseBeen a good few chapters since i last submitted a review (hope your not getting sick of me!). Anyways, just wanted to say i think this story is going really well, i have yet to be disapointed by a chapter. You put more emotion to it with each new addition and manage to grip the reader with that "can't put it down" feeling. Keep it up! -NextHeaven-
Col 2007-04-10 ch 1, anon.	abuseAt first I was turned away from this fanfic due to the low word count per chapter in fear that it is another one of those stories written by a third grader in the span of 2 minutes. Well I can tell you that I was completely wrong. You have a unique writing style that reminds me of Beowulf; somewhat poetic yet driving a story across to the reader. That, my friend, is what stands out the most in this fiction.
words.are.lovelier 2007-04-07 ch 1, anon.	abuseI don't actually ever review work online, hence my lack of a screen name, but I read online fiction on a daily basis. Like the other two reviewers of this story, I'm amazed at your story's lack of attention. Personally, I look forward to your updates anxiously, and your brief style of writing is so revealing and personal--I'm taken with it. You capture the essence of both characters while separating the differences between each of them and how they deal with their lives and their problems. Albel and Maria are painfully similar, yet dangerously different, and I admire your capability to paint this. In short, I just wanted to praise you, since I suppose most people are too perturbed by your choice of "pairing" to even give it a glance. You have my salute. Keep it up.

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