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| Stoneage Woman 2007-07-08 ch 1,  | abuseI don't see why you should hate it. It's interesting. I loved the bit where Chris describes a TV- how completely priceless. It's not as good as some of your others, but it's interesting, especially the bits about Leo and the dog, and Piper never getting over Leo. All in all, a great oneshot. |
| cd 2007-02-14 ch 1, anon. | abusei liked it alot. |
| iamkagomeiloveinuyasha 2007-02-14 ch 1, | abuseWA! PIPER! *crying* that was so sad but awesomely wriiten great job! |
| WellxWisher 2007-02-11 ch 1, | abuseI do hate it! It's so sad. It's really good, though--just very, very sad. Oh well. Such is life, sometimes, I guess. |
| forestwife 2007-02-10 ch 1, | abusethat was really good, very sad though. |
| hinormajean 2007-02-10 ch 1, | abusekeep going it might lead somewhere great would love to read more ifyou post |
| Write For The Soul 2007-02-10 ch 1, | abuseA really great story, I would love to read more. |
| SunshineDaisies816 2007-02-09 ch 1, | abuseThat was depressing... |
| Melissa Jooty 2007-02-09 ch 1, | abuseI don't hate this wonderfully angsty little piece at all. It's a very intriguing insight into fate and how it can't be cheated, no matter what you do. I loved the idea that the world might have been better off with the adult Chris' changes but wee Chris isn't so sure he's better off. |
| History Buff 1990 2007-02-09 ch 1, | abuseThis was pretty damn cool, so really I can't wait to read more from you girl, you should definitley get paid for this, it'd be worth the money to read your work, seriously, go to a publishing firm and demand some cash, you've earned it, anyhow, cool story, bye. |
| Melinda Wyatt Charmed 2007-02-09 ch 1, | abuseYou hate it? Why? I LOVED it!! It was a great story like all of your stories. It made me cry but I like those kind of fanfics.. Do I make any sense.. anyway, the story was really good.. Well done! |
| Amantine 2007-02-09 ch 1, | abusePoor Chris. The timeline's messed up pretty bad. I still liked it. |
| Camilinha 2007-02-09 ch 1, | abuseI felt like crying while I was reading this fic... So sad.. HE ended up losing both of them.. Never got to meet Leo, lost Piper when he was younger... But in a way he is still the same Chris... Always dealing with stuff alone... Never asking for help... Poor Chris.. Couldnt you make him happy in tjhis story?? So sad...lol... But really cute... As always! Besos Ca |
| kk1189 2007-02-09 ch 1, | abuseomg that is so sad! i almost cried! |
| scme 2007-02-09 ch 1, | abuseare you crazy? you cant hate it! its so sad and moving at the end. great one shot. congrats! |