Excellently written though a bit OOC on Alanna's part.
I like how slow you took Jonathan and Alanna's relationship and I'm glad you decided on that pairing. I didn't like George until Trickster's Choice came out and even then I don't see how she ended up with him. (yess I'm a shipper but I also like a good story)

Tabitha of MoonAurora

Good story. I liked the beginning best, when Alanna was getting to know Jon and Danae. If you ever feel inclined to write a sequel or vignette, I'm sure I will enjoy it.

Don't end please! I really liked how I was able to read several chapters after nothing, but don't stop! I think this story would be in a totally differnt world, I mean this could be your story and not have to worry about copy right. Anyway, I really liked the story.

I like it, but I wish you kept going...

The ending isn't maybe rushed, but it doesn't feel like much of an ending. Will there be an epilogue? Mayhap the formatting will help if you 'centre' the letter. Loved it, as always, and I'm sorry for not reviewing sooner.

Keep Writing, forever and for always,

xxTunstall Chickxx

Great! Can't wait for more :)

I liked this [:
Is there going to be a sequeul?

that's it? ahh. i was hoping for at least a couple fo more chapter.

but oh well, this was a great story and i hope you come up with another soon.

AJ all the way.

I like how the story ended! It was a good finish! Yay! Its a hopefully-happy-imagine-it-yourself ending. Love those! Seriously! I think I'm on a sugar high!

M Slightly rushed indeed. But with Alaine's response to Jon's proposal in the previous chapter, I don't know how you could continue the story without it becoming extremely predictable and cliche, and/or dragging on forever (but, then again, this is YOU we're talking about, and you're just amazing =D). It was probably best just to finish it up while the opportunity was on the porch (knocking, obviously, haha).

Anyway. I understand that it was just one of those things that you needed to just finish and be done with. I've had that feeling myself more than once.

Hope to see more from you soon! =]

kt

I'm glad they made up, and I was a little worried for Alanna there for a minute. Anyway, the ending was sweet, but like Alanna said- her a princess? Cute :) Update soon!

update soon. please.

Oh, that's good. But if I must be honest, I don't think she would say yes yet. But if there goes some time she could say yes. Good story. Keep writing. And keep surprising me. :)

Oh! Please update soon! It's so exciting! I can't wait to read the next chapter!

Geez... I kind of feel bad for Jon there.