well **.


that was 400 falvours of awesome

its a whole new take on the "hi im you, from the future" plot

You should seriously consider continuing this. It is such a great and powerful work of literature the likes of nothing I've ever read.

The prose that you use, the dialogue, the sheer detail that you put into this... it moved me. It made me feel as though I was there, in that room, listening to two Narutos speaking, looking at them, hearing the same sounds, seeing the same things, smelling the scents in the air.

You have a unique ability, an ability to write. And with your ability you made me happy, sad, and all other emotion you wanted me to feel with this story.

Yes, this is indeed a great read.

Thank you for sharing this with the whole world.

~Chonki

P.S. Your trilogy is also among the best I've read. Do continue to write such powerful, emotional pieces of art.

Very interesting.

The ranking of this story (the rank system was supposedly invented by you, ranging from "sh*t fic" to "great fic") is "great".

Well, that's an interesting way to do a time-travel fic. Kinda sad to see it hasn't been updated in two years, but I can understand that. Would like to see more of it. Good work, by the way.

i dont think ive ever seen such a concept for time travel before, at least in naruto. IT workd well and is much more plausible, especially with your proposed timescale...

All in all its a bit sad to see that you wrote it in 2007, so the main purpose of this short review is to guilt you into updating -_- at some point.

Thanks for... teasing :)

Love it. Naruto ravaged by the war, even more unhinged than usual and the already not quite sane version of himself years ago. Can't wait to read more!

This story just seems, er, awesome. In the awe kinda way. Keep writing.

Cool story. Great writing.

This was beautiful, but please don't blame me if I expect there will be nothing further in this series even though many would starve themselves to appease the the fanfiction god you so obviously are.

Thanks for this.

-Josey

I think that this would be a great story if you continued it. Hope you decide to update.

Well...wowie. Kraken you have me in your grasp. At least with this story...I'm a little concerned if your name has something to do with it or you just like that animal...or ii its both?

Now to your first chapter...although this could be a splendid one-shot you make the dream true I never dared to dream for a long time. You continue. You continue and break a certain border like it wasn't even there before.

Time really has some trouble with this little or big blond guy, huh? Your comment of Naruto about Naruto aka Prophet was a real masterpiece. It made me laugh so hard I couldn't breath, so happy I almost thought it wasn't possible anymore for me and the same time so sad that I could barely even read on...

though THAT was just a moment it...well really moved something in me...and this fraction of seconds after reading it I was sure I like your story nevermind what you're going to do with it (but a 'confrontation' of the new changed Naruto with someone from his past would be funny...in a certain way)

I'm a perfectionist and you seem to be one yourself...so I'm quite sure you seem to...think your story of net being perfect at the moment: rest assured it is. Though it's easy to say that for me your story seem to melt in itself like nothing else I read before. Your examples tend to be a bit exagerating but they sure do their work. Your sentences seem perfect. I, for myself, find myself really envious for not being such a talent as you...

Your idea is really good...some kind of disease as the biggest threat ever. Reminds me of the T-Virus in Resident Evil. I'm quite curious who's the creator of this thing and if it's intended?

The funniest thing is...you build up a large bundle of questions in your chapter and you really subtle answer them bit by bit. Though there are too many questions unanswered, the importanst being 'How and when's the story going to continue?'. Really your story seems like a...different level. A different level to compared to the BETTER stories of this site. Never even thinking of mentioning the badly written, badly plotted or outright awful stories that roam here around like over a piece of crap.

Really I would even consider paying you something (that sure menas a lot coming from a notorious borrower especially in terms regarding money) for you just continuing your story^^"

Mata ne,

some reader_21

Best story i have ever read hands down the way u describe everything is perfect not too simple but not enough to bore the people reading and the way you wrote is simply excellent you didn't just explain it like the other authors do. It was like I was there, that i could picture everything happening in my head. The only thing negative I have noticed is that there is no chapter 2 yet :P.

WOW. VERY nice dramatics at the end. Great story. Lovely part concerning the Kyuubi. Very descriptive. Unique twist on a old cliche.

Love it! Please update!

pansy ** title for an awesome fic. srsly, you should look into getting more than one chapter in here.
didn't really get the whole sea of blood bit though.. most i can understand is that old!Naruto falls into his psyche(of blood) gets attacked by some monstrosity that may or may not be the forces of the universe trying to get rid of him from this timeline, falls ino the fox's cage in which the fox them, presumably, destroys the monstrosity. close? idk, was a tad bit confused. and you dont seem to be going to post chpt2 with the answers to this little conundrum any time soon =/ hope you update some day ne

Hmm. In three days it will have been 2 years since you updated this.

Well, Just saying I liked it and hope you continue on it.