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kendall
2008-01-09 . chapter 19
I enjoyed this story so much that I stayed up until 5 a.m. reading it. Honestly, a really nice job.
Ayshen
2007-11-29 . chapter 19
Aw I loved this. It was the perfect end to a perfect story. Love the banter, the sexyness, Molly and Sonny...awesome, awesome job. Can't wait for the next one!
IlovetowriteSMP
2007-11-29 . chapter 19
Great ending. I look forward to the next story.
Murgy31
2007-11-29 . chapter 19
That was a fantastic story!
Temo
2007-08-03 . chapter 18
but, but, I don't want it to be over :(

Love Molly and her Daddy. Krissy and her pretend boyfriend. Sam and Cruz.

They didn't tell her about Ric though...but that's okay, they had lots of other stuff to deal with.

Waiting for the epilogue.
IlovetowriteSMP
2007-08-03 . chapter 18
This part was so sad

The sobs wouldn’t stop wracking her body as she remembered the gentle smile of her sister staring at her or her daughter Samantha, who wore glasses and loose fitting clothes that loved her. She had been a good person, but now she was Alexis Davis again.

LOL at this line

Cruz laughed as he looked at him and said, “Well we all see how well that worked out.”


Kristina was so cute in this chapter. Especially loved this part
“Yea Daddy, she knows you’re our Daddy now. I told her. Can we go now?”


Love all the Sam and Cruz stuff. I used to really want that couple when she was working at the police station with him.

Wonderful chapter!

REALLY looking forward to your next story and seeing what you have in store.
Ayshen
2007-07-12 . chapter 17
I seriously love Cruz; he is so freaking sweet, omg! The Monica/Sonny convo was interesting...I can't wait to see what happens when Lex wakes up...her family needs her...oh and do I sense some teasing of Liason? Me likey, lol. This is too great!
IlovetowriteSMP
2007-07-10 . chapter 17
Just reread the first chapter. It was really strong. I love all the realizations Sonny came to and how he put Ric in his place.

This Chapter 17 was good too. The Monica part was especially touching.

I look forward to seeing how you end this fic.
Ayshen
2007-06-29 . chapter 16
I love his fight for her...OMG its inspiring. I love how he handled Ric. Stavros was freaking me out. But mostly Sonny was amazing. That talk with Monica at the end...so good...he loves that woman so much...his soulmate! Can't wait to see Sonny's respsonse!
IlovetowriteSMP
2007-06-27 . chapter 13
This totally sounded like her. Great job with it.
Kristina pulled back and looked at her older sister in shock, “Last time I checked my astrological charts I was in for good news this month and next. Why have you heard anything?”
IlovetowriteSMP
2007-06-27 . chapter 9
“I promise Alexis, I will be by your side this time. But remember, you have to live up to your part of the bargain, nobody leaves.”


Love that!
Temo
2007-06-26 . chapter 16
yeah! Wake up Alexis, you can do it. Glad to see Monica...
IlovetowriteSMP
2007-06-26 . chapter 8
If I die, my last wish was to be united with the one man who completed me. It may sound absurd but when he slipped the ring on my finger, I felt for the first time that this marriage was going to last, it was going to last and I was going to enjoy every minute of it even if it only lasted a couple of hours, or days.”


I really like that whole section. Its so emotional and poignant and makes clear all her love for him.
IlovetowriteSMP
2007-06-26 . chapter 7
who was obviously mentally impaired and emotionally deficient.

Yes! Yes! Yes! Ric is all that and worse, much worse. He shouldn't be allowed to raise fleas let alone Molly.

I liked how Sonny told Sam to get her behind to the hospital. She still has some maturing to do but it seems she is at least moving in the right direction.
IlovetowriteSMP
2007-06-26 . chapter 6
Good because that leads me to my second request, I want you to marry me.”

AHH! My mouth totally dropped. Wow. Amazing twist. I was all teary over the Lila Quatermaine foundation and picturing them breaking ground with Alexis already gone and Sonny there in her place ( that would be heartbreaking!) and then you drop that exciting bombshell of her proposing. Love it.
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