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| Hope06 2008-05-23 ch 15,  | abuseok so the ending is a bit cheesy but other then that well done |
| Hope06 2008-05-10 ch 14, | abuseno not a cliffie Eden hang in there You have faith in Ried and he has triumphed ( trust me I don't think the team has ever in their lives seen Ried this worked up)You have tosurvive |
| Hope06 2008-05-10 ch 13, | abuseoh GOd she is alive love How Rossi picked up on Ried and Edan but Hotch didn't even Morgan knows it and is why he istrying to help but JJ I love you you know so much and a lot of the time you add it when they need it the most hold in there all of you and Eden you have faithi n Ried and he and the team are on the way |
| Caitlin Knight 2008-05-09 ch 12, | abuseI love your fan fiction and its really good. I love the concept is a good read. I like how you kept my attention throughout the story. Good chapter and good story. |
| Hope06 2008-05-01 ch 12, | abuseOH God no not good but Edan is a fighter and so is the team because when they find out that she is meeting they will not end until they find her.. alive hey thanks for the thanks I love reviewing your stories keep up the amazing work |
| Hope06 2008-04-18 ch 11, | abuseWOW amazing Ried's memory comes in handy and in this case it was to prove to Eden that he has always cared wow |
| Hope06 2008-04-11 ch 10, | abuseWow got to love the team for not saying anything and Ried for comming to help Eden keep up the amazing work |
| Hope06 2008-04-02 ch 9, | abuseI love how the team found out so cute yet so funny at the same time I am glad that Emma is ok |
| ReidsLuvr93 2008-03-21 ch 8, | abuseEEK! GREAT CHAPTER! *que trumpets* Emily to the rescue! I can't wait for the next chapter! :D LOVE IS IN THE AIR! "“When I first saw you, I mean, I didn’t know your name, where you came from, who you were but I fell in love with you,” Reid said, taking her face in his hands. “The first time I saw you, I felt like I had come home,” Eden said, her voice barely above a whisper. “I had found myself in you.”" Okay that was beyond romantic! LOVED IT! :D |
| Hope06 2008-03-21 ch 8, | abuseEden and Ried are so cute I am so glad the Emily came to Eden's rescure and Pen and Morgan definently have something amazing chapter |
| ReidsLuvr93 2008-03-15 ch 7, | abuseOh my god! Poor Spence and Eden! :'( I cry for them! What's up with the Carbone family!?!?!?!?! Subtle hinting are you? |
| kaycat11 2008-03-12 ch 1, | abuseThis is such a believable story, I'm really enjoying it. |
| ReidsLuvr93 2008-03-11 ch 6, | abuseOh I can hardly wait! Eek great chapter! I can't wait for the next update! :D |
| ReidsLuvr93 2008-03-03 ch 5, | abuseOhmygod! Great chapter! UPDATE SOON! Oh I hope she goes to Reid... |
| ReidsLuvr93 2008-02-16 ch 4, | abuseI think you reuploaded the same chapter as chapter 3 |